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Washington State Route 531[edit]
This article is a GA and recently failed its A-Class promotion. The article has also gone through some copyediting by User:Finetooth and I would like to know what improvements need to be made to get this article to FA status by 2009. ~~ ĈőмρǖтέŗĠύʎ890100 (t ↔ Ĕ ↔ ώ) 00:52, 3 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Notes from Admrb♉ltz (t • c • log) (19:43, 5 August 2008 (UTC))[reply]
- Per WP:EL#AVOID #11, the two links in the external links section (Highway Geek and Highways of Washington (dead link)) should not be listed.
- I like the new map, though I am still not sure we need the black and white one in the history section.
- Other than that I am fine with the article for A-Class.
- I fixed all the problems and removed the map. ~~ ĈőмρǖтέŗĠύʎ890100 (t ↔ Ĕ ↔ ώ) 03:19, 6 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- One more in the history section "It was a relatively small undertaking to make the sidewalks in North Lakewood safer for children in the Lakewood School District, south of SR 531. The project lasted until August 2007." reads kind of funny, could you possibly rewrite this sentence? --Admrb♉ltz (t • c • log) 03:33, 6 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Done - "The project resulted in a small amount of sidewalks to be constructed in North Lakewood so walking to school would be safer for children in the Lakewood School District, south of SR 531. The project lasted until August 2007." ~~ ĈőмρǖтέŗĠύʎ890100 (t ↔ Ĕ ↔ ώ) 16:12, 6 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Hrm, I was thinking maybe "Completed in August 2007, WSDOT added sidewalks to SR-531 near the schools of the Lakewood School District that line the highway to improve safety." as your sentence still reads a bit odd. --Admrb♉ltz (t • c • log) 16:24, 6 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Or "WSDOT completed a project to add sidewalks along SR-531 near the schools of the Lakewood School District that line the highway in August 2007." --Admrb♉ltz (t • c • log) 16:26, 6 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Hrm, I was thinking maybe "Completed in August 2007, WSDOT added sidewalks to SR-531 near the schools of the Lakewood School District that line the highway to improve safety." as your sentence still reads a bit odd. --Admrb♉ltz (t • c • log) 16:24, 6 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Done - "The project resulted in a small amount of sidewalks to be constructed in North Lakewood so walking to school would be safer for children in the Lakewood School District, south of SR 531. The project lasted until August 2007." ~~ ĈőмρǖтέŗĠύʎ890100 (t ↔ Ĕ ↔ ώ) 16:12, 6 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The second one was added. Anything else? ~~ ĈőмρǖтέŗĠύʎ890100 (t ↔ Ĕ ↔ ώ) 16:36, 6 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Looks good to me. --Admrb♉ltz (t • c • log) 16:41, 6 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Great. I am renominating the article for A-Class. ~~ ĈőмρǖтέŗĠύʎ890100 (t ↔ Ĕ ↔ ώ) 17:19, 6 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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