Template talk:Did you know/Approved
This page holds approved nominations that are waiting to appear in the "Did you know" section on the Main Page. Following DYK approval, nominations are processed and moved into a Prep area, and from there, prep sets are promoted to a queue, and then to the main page.
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Section | # of Hooks | # Verified |
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April 19 | ||
May 2 | 1 | |
May 10 | 1 | |
May 12 | 2 | 1 |
May 14 | 1 | 1 |
May 16 | 2 | |
May 17 | 3 | 1 |
May 20 | 4 | 2 |
May 21 | 3 | 1 |
May 22 | 3 | |
May 24 | 2 | 2 |
May 25 | 2 | 1 |
May 26 | 2 | 1 |
May 27 | 2 | |
May 28 | 1 | |
May 29 | 1 | |
May 30 | 3 | 1 |
May 31 | 1 | 1 |
June 1 | 2 | 1 |
June 2 | 4 | 3 |
June 3 | 3 | 1 |
June 4 | 1 | 1 |
June 5 | 4 | 3 |
June 6 | 2 | 1 |
June 7 | 2 | |
June 8 | 4 | 2 |
June 9 | 11 | 6 |
June 10 | 4 | 3 |
June 11 | 5 | 3 |
June 12 | 7 | 5 |
June 13 | 13 | 12 |
June 14 | 7 | 3 |
June 15 | 6 | 4 |
June 16 | 8 | 6 |
June 17 | 9 | 6 |
June 18 | 8 | 4 |
June 19 | 4 | 2 |
June 20 | 5 | 2 |
June 21 | 9 | 4 |
June 22 | 11 | 4 |
June 23 | 13 | 3 |
June 24 | 11 | 1 |
June 25 | 13 | 6 |
June 26 | 9 | 3 |
June 27 | 6 | 3 |
June 28 | 7 | 3 |
June 29 | 4 | 1 |
June 30 | 5 | |
July 1 | 5 | |
Total | 236 | 108 |
Last updated 15:26, 1 July 2024 UTC Current time is 15:37, 1 July 2024 UTC [refresh] |
Instructions for nominators[edit]
This page is for those nominations that have already been approved and are waiting to be promoted. If yours has been approved but has not yet been run on the main page, it should either be on this page or will soon be moved here, or already promoted to a Prep area or Queue ahead of an appearance on the main page.
If you wish to create a new nomination, please go to the Template talk:Did you know page; there are instructions there in a section similar to this one on how to nominate an article for DYK.
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Backlogged?[edit]
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Where is my hook?[edit]
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Instructions for other editors[edit]
How to promote an accepted hook[edit]
- See Wikipedia:Did you know/Preparation areas for full instructions.
- In one window, open the DYK nomination subpage of the hook you would like to promote.
- In another window, open the prep set you intend to add the hook to.
- In the prep set...
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- Add an edit summary, e.g., "Promoted [[Jane Fonda]]", preview, and save
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- Add an edit summary, e.g., "Promoted original hook to Prep 3", preview, and save
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How to remove a hook from the prep areas or queue[edit]
- Edit the prep area or queue where the hook is and remove the hook and the credits associated with it.
- Go to the hook's nomination subpage (there should have been a link to it in the credits section).
- View the edit history for that page
- Go back to the last version before the edit where the hook was promoted, and revert to that version to make the nomination active again.
- Add a new icon on the nomination subpage to cancel the previous tick and leave a comment after it explaining that the hook was removed from the prep area or queue, and why, so that later reviewers are aware of this issue.
- Add a transclusion of the template back to the nominations page so that reviewers can see it. It goes under the date that it was first created/expanded/listed as a GA. You may need to add back the day header for that date if it had been removed from the nominations page.
- If you removed the hook from a queue, it is best to either replace it with another hook from one of the prep areas, or to leave a message at WT:DYK asking someone else to do so.
Nominations[edit]
Special occasion holding area[edit]
Non-Olympics requests[edit]
Summer Olympics, July 26 through August 11[edit]
Please see Wikipedia talk:Did you know#Olympic hooks table for potential timing changes.
July 23 (pre-Olympics hook)[edit]
Toby Olubi, Can't Touch This (game show)
- ... that Toby Olubi has claimed to have funded his Olympic bobsled career by being "shot out of a cannon"? Source: https://www.hampshirechronicle.co.uk/sport/national/15893627.human-cannonball-toby-olubi-turns-focus-bobsleigh-duties-pyeongchang/
- ALT1: ... that Toby Olubi has claimed to have funded his Olympic bobsled career by becoming "a human cannonball"?
- ALT2: ... that Toby Olubi funded his Olympic bobsled career with £12,000 from Deal or No Deal?
- ALT3: ... that prior to broadcast, the "unspecified marque" on Can't Touch This had been used as an example of why British game show prizes were "rubbish"?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Claude_Hamilton_Verity
- Comment: I can't get over The Telegraph, The Times, The Guardian, and even the BBC all printing as gospel that he actually did it - he was in fact shot out of a catapult. Where's your fact checking?
Launchballer 13:13, 1 June 2024 (UTC).
Good work Launchballer. 5x expansion, article is properly sourced, and hook is interesting. 48JCLTALK 01:44, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- @48JCL: Which article are you referring to? This is a double nomination.--Launchballer 14:42, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: Both. 48JCLTALK 15:23, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- I personally like ALT1 or ALT0, but ALT1 my preference. 48JCLTALK 15:28, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- @48JCL: Which article are you referring to? This is a double nomination.--Launchballer 14:42, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- This had already been through admin checks. I've pulled it out of Q3 and put it into the Olympics SOHA. Schwede66 23:31, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
July 24 (pre-Olympics hook)[edit]
Philippines at the 1924 Summer Olympics
- ... that for the opening ceremony of the 1924 Summer Olympics, the Philippines held two flags as they were still a colony of the United States?
- ALT1: ... that the Philippines sent athletes at the 1924 Summer Olympics because of an athlete that didn't compete at the Games? Source: [5]
- ALT2: ... that at the 1924 Summer Olympics, the Philippines was the first Southeast Asian nation to compete at the Olympics? Source: [6]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Gladys Cromwell
Arconning (talk) 16:03, 28 June 2024 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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Image eligibility:
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- Used in article:
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: I prefer ALT 1 TheNuggeteer (talk) 04:57, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
![](http://upload.luquay.com/wikipedia/commons/thumb/5/5c/Olympic_rings_without_rims.svg/50px-Olympic_rings_without_rims.svg.png)
July 25[edit]
Solomon Islands at the 2020 Summer Olympics
- ... that a law was signed so that the delegation of the Solomon Islands at the 2020 Summer Olympics could return home?
- ALT1: ... that the Solomon Islands used the 2020 Summer Olympics as a learning opportunity for their hosting of the 2023 Pacific Games? Source: https://www.oceanianoc.org/press/rara-using-tokyo-olympics-to-inform-sol-2023-pacific-games
- ALT2: ... that Naoyuki Fujiyama's role as the chef de mission of the Solomon Islands at the 2020 Summer Olympics was controversial as he was not a citizen of the Solomon Islands? Source: https://www.oceanianoc.org/press/tokyo-2020-organising-committee-hosts-chefs-de-mission-seminar-in-tokyo-this-week https://www.solomonstarnews.com/fujiyama-told-to-step-down/
- Reviewed: [[]]
Arconning (talk) 13:19, 27 May 2024 (UTC).
Qualifies through 5x expansion. Good sourcing on both the first hook and the article in general. No evidence of copyvio, article generally in good shape. Still needs a QPQ. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:24, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Oops! I've seen you around so much I sort of assumed you needed a QPQ; this is good to go. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:49, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
July 27[edit]
Fathimath Dheema Ali
- ... that Fathimath Dheema Ali is the first Olympic qualifier from the Maldives?
- Source: Maldives Olympic Committee (previous Maldivian Olympians entered only through a quota)
- ALT1: ... that table tennis player Fathimath Dheema Ali competed at the world championships when she was age 10? Source: Olympics.com
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mark Hutton
BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:33, 20 June 2024 (UTC).
Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 00:48, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
- Adequate sourcing:
- Refs 2, 8, and 9 don't mention a bronze medal, but everything else is fine.
- Neutral:
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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QPQ: - Not done
Overall: Created seven days before nom and prose is 2909 B. BeanieFan11, do the QPQ and fix the sourcing issue, and you're good to go. ミラP@Miraclepine 01:16, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
- Can I please suggest that we run this hook on 27 July, which is when the single women's table tennis preliminary round starts? See Wikipedia talk:Did you know#Olympic hooks table for background. Schwede66 04:44, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: Have the above been addressed and resolved? Z1720 (talk) 15:56, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Miraclepine: QPQ done and added a reference for the bronze medal. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:35, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: In that case,
ALT0 approved. ミラP@Miraclepine 20:39, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: In that case,
July 31[edit]
Dylan Travis
- ... that in nine years, basketball player Dylan Travis played for nine head coaches?
- Source: USA Basketball ("In nine years of playing basketball beyond the high school level, he played for nine different coaches.")
BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:34, 18 June 2024 (UTC).
Hi BeanieFan11, review follows: article moved to mainspace on 11 June and exceeds minimum length; article is generally well written (I couldn't parse "was named first-team All-State, All-Metro and to the Lincoln Journal Star's Super-State Team" but might just be my ignorance of basketball?); sources cited look to be reliable enough, though I am not familiar with them; I didn't pick up any issues with overly close paraphrasing from a spot check; hook fact is interesting enough for me, mentioned in the article and checks out to the source cited. My first review for a good few months but looks fine to me except that a QPQ is awaited - Dumelow (talk) 15:19, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: Following up on the QPQ. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:20, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Dumelow: QPQ done; sorry for the delay. (Also, in the sentence you mention, those things mentioned are different all-star teams.) BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:51, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
Thanks, looks good to me - Dumelow (talk) 16:06, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Dumelow: QPQ done; sorry for the delay. (Also, in the sentence you mention, those things mentioned are different all-star teams.) BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:51, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: Following up on the QPQ. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:20, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
August 4[edit]
2022 European Athletics Championships – Women's 400 metres, 2022 European Athletics Championships – Women's 400 metres hurdles
![](http://upload.luquay.com/wikipedia/commons/thumb/c/cb/2022-08-19_European_Championships_2022_%E2%80%93_Women%27s_400_Metres_Hurdles_by_Sandro_Halank%E2%80%93016.jpg/220px-2022-08-19_European_Championships_2022_%E2%80%93_Women%27s_400_Metres_Hurdles_by_Sandro_Halank%E2%80%93016.jpg)
- ... that Femke Bol won the women's 400 metres and 400 metres hurdles (final pictured) in an unprecedented double victory at the 2022 European Athletics Championships?
- Source: Dutch source "Missie geslaagd. Femke Bol heeft vrijdagavond in München voor een unieke dubbelslag op een groot titeltoernooi in de atletiekwereld gezorgd. Het 22-jarige supertalent liep naar de Europese titel op de 400 meter horden. Twee dagen eerder was ze al Europees kampioene op de 400 meter zonder hindernissen geworden. Geen enkele vrouw deed dat eerder." English source alternative
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/María Pacheco, Template:Did you know nominations/Alyssa Mendoza
Editør (talk) 10:59, 23 June 2024 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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Image eligibility:
- Freely licensed:
- Used in article:
- Clear at 100px:
- Personally I feel at 100px the current image is too wide to be useful for this nomination. I would suggest changing it for either the Brossier/Bol photo from the 400m semi or the Lehikoinen/Bol photo from the 400m hurdles final, but I will also leave this up to the promoter if they feel differently.
QPQ: Done. |
Overall: Both articles' prose meets 5x expansion. Readable prose on both also surpasses the target. Generally well sourced and well written, hook is also cited and interesting. Images are free, however some issues regarding the selected image (see above). 2 QPQs done to match the double bold articles. Besides potentially swapping the image out for another I'm happy to pass the DYK for these articles. Great job! Sims2aholic8 (talk) 09:56, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for your review. I would prefer the Lehikoinen/Bol photo as alternative. – Editør (talk) 10:27, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- Or a cropped version of the originally proposed photo if that is an option (cropped to a square, centered on Bol). – Editør (talk) 10:34, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- I've added a crop of the above. Not a square; this looks better (I looked at a square crop first). Schwede66 02:51, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you, I'd prefer your crop. I think the hook and image caption should be changed to:
- I've added a crop of the above. Not a square; this looks better (I looked at a square crop first). Schwede66 02:51, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
- Or a cropped version of the originally proposed photo if that is an option (cropped to a square, centered on Bol). – Editør (talk) 10:34, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- ... that Femke Bol (pictured) won the women's 400 metres and 400 metres hurdles in an unprecedented double victory at the 2022 European Athletics Championships?
- – Editør (talk) 08:06, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
![](http://upload.luquay.com/wikipedia/commons/thumb/5/5c/Olympic_rings_without_rims.svg/50px-Olympic_rings_without_rims.svg.png)
August 9[edit]
Manizha Talash
- ... that Manizha Talash is "Afghanistan's first female breakdancer"?
- Source: Reuters
- ALT1: ... that Olympic breakdancer Manizha Talash said that when she saw a video "of a man just spinning over his head ... I immediately told myself: 'That's what I want to do with my life!'"? Source: same
- ALT2: ... that Olympic breakdancer Manizha Talash has continued performing despite receiving death threats? Source: same
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/"We want the ball and we're going to score!"
BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:44, 20 June 2024 (UTC).
- Not a review, but can I suggest that, if this gets approved, that we run this hook on 9 August? See Wikipedia talk:Did you know#Olympic hooks table for background. Could we also have a hook that mentions the Olympics, please? Schwede66 04:22, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: Please complete the QPQ. Z1720 (talk) 15:55, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
New enough and long enough. QPQ has since been supplied. All hook facts check out and are interesting in various ways, especially ALT0/ALT1. Dunno if we need quotes on the quote from the headline. No textual or other issues. Fine for the 9 August Olympic suggestion. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 02:29, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
Approved nominations[edit]
Articles created/expanded on May 12[edit]
Lillie Shockney
- ... that Lillie Shockney is a co-founder of the Academy of Oncology Nurse & Patient Navigators?
- ALT1: ... that breast cancer patients became a primary patient population for nurse navigation after Lillie Shockney reported the impact of the program at Johns Hopkins Hospital? Source: https://www.myamericannurse.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/12/an12-Oncology-Navigtion-1201.pdf "Breast cancer navigation became a primary patient population focus of nurse navigation when Lillie Shockney, MAS, BS, RN, publicized her success at the Johns Hopkins Hospital in Baltimore, Maryland, where she helped increase appointment completions, improve timeliness of care, and expedite chemotherapy start time by 2 weeks."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Evgeniia Subbotina
Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 17:18, 12 May 2024 (UTC).
The article is long enough and new enough with no copyright violations. All of the references are reliable. The article is neutral. Both hooks are cited, but I prefer ALT1. SL93 (talk) 21:40, 19 May 2024 (UTC)
As a promoter, I also greatly prefer ALT1, but I don't quite understand the "nurse navigation" bit. What's the best way to simplify the hook Mary Mark Ockerbloom? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:33, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- The "nurse navigation" or "patient navigation" field is one that few people will know and hopefully people will go to the page to find out more about it. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 16:05, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- Ah I see, is there any way we can rephrase "primary patient population" to make it more accessible for the general reader then Mary Mark Ockerbloom? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:43, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
- The "nurse navigation" or "patient navigation" field is one that few people will know and hopefully people will go to the page to find out more about it. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 16:05, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
- AirshipJungleman29, I get it now. How's this? (same references and meaning, less tachnical language) Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 01:12, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1a: ... that breast cancer patients became a population who frequently worked with nurse navigators after Lillie Shockney reported the impact of the program at Johns Hopkins Hospital?
- ...I'm not sure, I think it's still a little unclear. I'll wait to see what another promoter thinks. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:13, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with AirshipJungleman29. It can be confusing to readers based on the lack of context. 48JCL TALK 11:35, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1b: ... that breast cancer patients started to work more frequently with nurse navigators after Lillie Shockney reported the impact of the program at Johns Hopkins Hospital?
- ALT2: ... that Lillie Shockney organized a program at Johns Hopkins Hospital in which nurse navigators help breast cancer patients to deal with daily life issues as well as medical treatment? Additional source: "patient navigators, including social workers, often focus on practical problems, including transportation, childcare, housing, and psychosocial issues." Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 21:58, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
SL93 are you available to review the above two hooks? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:56, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
The new hooks are both verified, and I prefer ALT1b as the shortest and more to the point. SL93 (talk) 17:48, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- @SL93: Someone has uploaded a photo of her, so I have added it to the infobox, the wikidata entity and the nomination template. Thanks everyone! Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 16:12, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. I'm leaving this for another promoter to pick up, should they wish. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:01, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- Why do we think this photo is actually CC-BY-SA like the commons page claims? The Author is listed as "Lillie Shockney"; considering this is a photo of Lillie Shockney, and looks like a studio portrait, it's unlikely that it's a selfie, and thus the Author is incorrect. The author of a photograph is the photographer. And it's apparently downloaded from https://aonnonline.org/authors?autid=1:lillie-shockney-2, which has a highly restrictive TOS statement. RoySmith (talk) 23:08, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- I have removed the photo from the nomination. Issue resolved; this can now be promoted. Schwede66 05:58, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
- Why do we think this photo is actually CC-BY-SA like the commons page claims? The Author is listed as "Lillie Shockney"; considering this is a photo of Lillie Shockney, and looks like a studio portrait, it's unlikely that it's a selfie, and thus the Author is incorrect. The author of a photograph is the photographer. And it's apparently downloaded from https://aonnonline.org/authors?autid=1:lillie-shockney-2, which has a highly restrictive TOS statement. RoySmith (talk) 23:08, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. I'm leaving this for another promoter to pick up, should they wish. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:01, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 14[edit]
Saleh Manaf
- ... that during the protests against Bekasi regent Saleh Manaf, protesters sealed his office and put two goat heads in front of the door? Source: https://www.liputan6.com/news/read/107867/pintu-ruangan-bupati-bekasi-disegel-kepala-kambing
- Reviewed:
- Comment: DYKcheck: "Assuming article is at 5x now, expansion began 11 edits ago on May 10, 2024"
Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 12:00, 14 May 2024 (UTC).
- Comment: The Bekasi link in the hook is linked to Bekasi city instead of Bekasi Regency. I fixed it Nyanardsan (talk) 07:47, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Jeromi Mikhael: Please complete a QPQ and link to it above Thanks, Z1720 (talk) 02:14, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
@Jeromi Mikhael: Has not supplied a QPQ, so I am marking this for closure as rejected. Z1720 (talk) 00:54, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Z1720: I've done a QPQ here! Please retract the closure. Real life got in my way. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael
New reviewer required. Z1720 (talk) 17:24, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
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- Neutral:
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
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Hook eligibility:
- Cited:
- Interesting:
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: As noted above, the lede should be beefed up before this hits the main page. Also, given the recent RFC, I'm not sure focusing on the negative aspects of this BLP (i.e., the goat head protest), is going to fly on the main page. It's a very interesting fact, and supported by Liputan6, but something else may work better in the current climate. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 14:16, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492: I've expanded the lede of the article, but I might need some help finding interesting part of the article other than the BLPed hook. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 12:32, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
- Maybe something like "that Saleh Manaf became Regent of Bekasi even after his party attempted to annul the results?". If we have an ALT, we can allow the admin making the queues to make the decision. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 13:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492: ALT1: "... that Saleh Manaf was elected as the Regent of Bekasi despite being a dummy candidate in the election?" Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 16:26, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
Thanks. That should give the promoting administrator a choice and hopefully avoid any fuss at the main page. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 16:33, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALT2: "... that Saleh Manaf was elected as the Regent of Bekasi despite being an underdog in the election?". Tagging SL93. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 00:39, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
Unpromoted per WT:DYK. New review needed for ALT2. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 22:58, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Jeromi Mikhael: Where is it in the article?--Launchballer 17:50, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: It was not mentioned explicitly previously, but there was a discussion regarding this in here. I've copyedited the article to make the fact in the hook more explicit. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 18:00, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- That is not what an underdog is (someone expected to lose), and in either case you'd need an end-of-sentence citation for it.--Launchballer 18:37, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: Alright then, change of hook. ALT4: "... that the regent of Bekasi, Saleh Manaf, was protested by his own local environment service?" quote from: this one, ref no. 14
Beberapa waktu yang lalu, Dinas Kebersihan Kabupaten Bekasi sebenarnya sudah mengirimkan surat protes kepada Bupati Bekasi, meminta pertanggung-jawaban bupati terhadap dampak lingkungan dan akibat sampah yang dibuang truk pengangkut sampah.
(Some time ago, the Bekasi Regency Environment Service actually sent a letter of protest to the Regent of Bekasi, asking the regent to be responsible for the environmental impact and consequences of the waste thrown by the waste trucks.)Looks good to me.--Launchballer 06:10, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: Alright then, change of hook. ALT4: "... that the regent of Bekasi, Saleh Manaf, was protested by his own local environment service?" quote from: this one, ref no. 14
- That is not what an underdog is (someone expected to lose), and in either case you'd need an end-of-sentence citation for it.--Launchballer 18:37, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: It was not mentioned explicitly previously, but there was a discussion regarding this in here. I've copyedited the article to make the fact in the hook more explicit. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 18:00, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 17[edit]
Anna Russell Cole
- ... that Anna Russell Cole (pictured), a devout Methodist, was instrumental in supporting Vanderbilt University's independence from the church, donating significantly to its endowment campaign? Source: Turner, William B. (February 2000). "Cole, Anna Virginia Russell". American National Biography. New York: Oxford University Press. doi:10.1093/anb/9780198606697.article.2001271. (subscription required), Notable American Women, 1607-1950 A Biographical Dictionary · Volume 2, page 358
- ALT0a: ... that Anna Russell Cole (pictured), a devout Methodist, was key in supporting Vanderbilt University's independence from the church's hierarchy, donating to its endowment campaign? Source: Same as above.
- ALT1: ... In 1926, Anna Russell Cole (pictured), a significant benefactor of Vanderbilt University, donated $10,000 to endow the office of dean of women? Source: Same as above.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Eurovision Song Contest 1974
- Comment:
QPQ will be done promptly.Done.
X (talk) 02:54, 17 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: @Xoak: The article is new enough, as it was created on May 16 and nominated on May 17. It is long enough. There is a source appended to every paragraph. It is written with a neutral, encyclopedic tone, and the hooks are cited properly and are interesting. (The angle of ALT0 is evidently that Cole being devout, a contemporary reader might expect her to support church control of the university; instead, she considered the university's independence important enough to financially support. The angle of ALT1 is simply that she was a fiscally abundant benefactor.) I am presuming good faith about content cited to Tinling (1986) to which I don't have ready access as well as about content cited to Cole (2007) as I don't have a means of accessing the work's first volume (I checked Open Library but was only able to borrow volume 3 of Dictionary of Women Worldwide: 25,000 Women Through the Ages ). There are, however,
seven six matters about which I seek resolution prior to approving the nomination:
First, Cole (2007) is credited to Anna Russell Cole according to your citation. Is the content on page 413 of Dictionary of Women Worldwide a (posthumously published) autobiography by Cole? Or is the name of the author just a particularly unusual coincidence? Or is this a citation reference formatting issue?
Second, Upon returning to Augusta, Cole taught French and German at a local girls' school
may constitute close paraphrasing of On returning to Augusta, Russell taught French and German at a local girls’ school
(Turner 2000). If you consider this information necessary to include, is there a way to rephrase or reorganize so as to not so closely paraphrase?
Third, the article states Edmund Cole had five children from a previous marriage
. However, Radcliffe College (1971) calls him a widower with seven children
at the time of his marriage to Anna Russell Cole, sounding like he had the seven children at the time of the marriage.
Fourth, I can't help but think that the article should explain that"Colemere"
was the name/nickname of Anna Russell Cole's house in Nashville. I also think her death place should just be given as Nashville; infoboxes seem usually just name municipal locations, not the specific buildings of one's death.
Fifth, the sentence Cole supported international peace efforts, attending a conference in Vienna in 1916, writing an editorial for the Nashville Tennessean in support of Woodrow Wilson, and donating $2,000 to the Democratic National Committee in 1920
makes it sound as though the Wilson editorial and DNC donations were a subset of her international peace efforts. However, Turner (2000) frames it almost the other way: her international peace activism was a subset of her support for Woodrow Wilson. I'm also concerned that this may be too close a paraphrase and would be grateful for some alternative presentation of the information.
Sixth, She also had an interest in the arts and was a patron of various cultural institutions.
is cited to Turner (2000) but I can't seem to verify it in that source. I can accept the possibility that my eyes are somehow glazing past it; I just would appreciate the verification being pointed out to me, or a quotation provided.
Seventh, I have questions about the copyright status of the image selected, as it appears to be a portrait painting hung on a wall. As WP:PUBLICDOMAIN explains, [b] [I have struck the seventh matter on discovering I slightly misread c:File:PD-US_table.svg and WP:PUBLICDOMAIN, which states that works by creators who died more than 70 years ago fall into the public domain if they are first published after 2002. As the Tennessee Portrait Project's earliest documentation of portraits was January 2003, this places it after 2002 and therefore means the portrait is in the public domain. Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 02:02, 21 June 2024 (UTC)]ecause an artwork is not published by being exhibited, and also neither by being created or sold, one needs to know when reproductions of the artwork (photos, postcards, lithographs, casts of statues, and so on) were first published. That constitutes publication of the artwork, and from then on, the work is subject to all the rules for published works
. The upload on Wikimedia Commons was certainly made in good faith, but it doesn't establish when the work was published in a manner that would clarify its copyright status. Although works created by creators who died more than 70 years ago fall into the public domain if they are only first published after 2003, the source for the image, the Tennessee Portrait Project, reports that it was digitally compiling portraits as early as January 2003, meaning it's not for sure whether the work was published during or after 2003. Evidence for the image's public domain status needs to be provided, or it needs to be relicensed as fair non-free use (because Cole is dead and it is not possible to get a better image of her without just copying this portrait which would be worse to do) and excluded from the hook.
While these matters are several, the article's in otherwise good shape. I'll be happy to approve the nomination once these are resolved.
Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 04:25, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Xoak: Please address the above. Z1720 (talk) 15:14, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
According to their user page, they are on wikibreak and do not expect to return until late August. If they return soon, I have no objection to somebody reopening this, but for now I'm going to mark it closed. RoySmith (talk) 16:53, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- Ah, that turn of events is too bad. I guess maybe Xoak thought the review would wrap up before their break started but then that didn't happen. I don't suppose there's any way around this? Could some other user take on responsibility for the nomination/making the needed fixes? I mean, I could probably make the fixes, just by rewriting the CLOP parts and cutting the unverified sentence.(Also, you stated that you're marking it as closed, but it seems to not be? In the sense that there's no green box around this; there's just the delete icon you added?) Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 20:36, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Hydrangeans: If you're happy to adopt this nomination, I am happy to review it.--Launchballer 08:43, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: I'm happy to adopt the nomination. I just went over the article, and I think I've fixed everything I identified in my own review. I was even able to access Dictionary of Women Worldwide (and it turns out "Cole (2007)" was an encyclopedic entry titled "Cole, Anna Russell") and do some verification checking for portions cited to that. Thanks for being willing to review the nomination while I adopt it, and let me know if there's anything else to address. Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 15:39, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
I think they have been as well. I prefer ALT1 and AGF that one. Long enough, new enough. No copyright concerns, no maintence templates deserved. I don't know what the rules are for QPQs for adopted nominations; as Xoak already supplied one, I think we're good. Let's roll.--Launchballer 07:27, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: I'm happy to adopt the nomination. I just went over the article, and I think I've fixed everything I identified in my own review. I was even able to access Dictionary of Women Worldwide (and it turns out "Cole (2007)" was an encyclopedic entry titled "Cole, Anna Russell") and do some verification checking for portions cited to that. Thanks for being willing to review the nomination while I adopt it, and let me know if there's anything else to address. Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 15:39, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Hydrangeans: If you're happy to adopt this nomination, I am happy to review it.--Launchballer 08:43, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 20[edit]
Flyover (book)
- ... that Flyover, a 2023 American science fiction novel portraying a dystopian future where part of the USA became a theocracy, has been published in French but not yet in English? Source: https://www.irishtimes.com/opinion/2023/07/22/lara-marlowe-this-vision-of-a-divided-totalitarian-us-does-not-seem-much-like-fiction/ and https://www.economist.com/culture/2024/04/11/americans-are-turning-to-stories-of-civil-war-real-and-imagined
Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:24, 20 May 2024 (UTC).
- The clause adds interest, but I wonder if a snappier and more concise version of the hook also works:
- ALT1 ... that the 2023 American novel Flyover has been published in French but not yet in English?
- Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:16, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
- WP has strong precedent for discussing any fictional events in present tense, i.e. "becomes" instead of "became" Orchastrattor (talk) 19:19, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
@Piotrus: My review follows:
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Overall: The article is new enough (created May 17 and nominated May 20), and it's long enough. It's in a complete state, and it neutrally covers the topic, citing a range of relevant periodicals reviewing and covering the topic. Earwig detects minimal overlap with other texts, and spot checking indicates what overlaps there are rise from quotations, proper names, and common terms (like "intelligence agencies"). I read the Irish Times article and verified content cited to it. Other material is either in a language I do not speak or is behind a paywall I cannot breach, so good faith is presumed (and such good faith seems reasonably placed, given the coherence with the Irish Times article). Although the hook fact is technically capable of changing, there seems to be no evidence that it is likely to change, meaning it's still a
a definite fact that is unlikely to change
. The hook is interesting, but there are some minor issues pertaining to WP:DYKCITE: The facts of the hook in the article should be cited no later than the end of the sentence in which they appear
. This is a stricter standard than other evaluations, like GA (where citing to the end of a paragraph is usually fine). This problem applies to the following content in ALT0:
American science fiction novel
: The current version of the article doesn't in the body describe Flyover isn't as an American novel or as a science fiction novel. It is described as "science fiction" only in the infobox and lead (and a category), and without citation.a dystopian future where part of the USA became a theocracy
: This fact about the plot of the book stated in the body text, in the plot section, but it's cited at the end of the paragraph instead ofno later than the end of the sentence in which
the fact appears.- Additionally, as Orchastrattor points, the word "became" in ALT0 should instead be "becomes", as descriptions of literature use the literary present tense. You do this in the body text but not in the text of ALT0.
As these three issues are relatively minor, I think they could be resolved readily. Once they are, please ping me, and I'll approve the nomination. Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 18:58, 27 June 2024 (UTC) Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 18:58, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- Hydrangeans Please see reworded ALT0 (and ref added in text):
- ALT0: ... that Flyover, a 2023 science fiction novel by an American author, portraying a dystopian future where part of the USA becomes a theocracy, has been published in French but not yet in English?
- --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 14:55, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Piotrus: Thanks for the responsiveness. Flyover being a science fiction novel is now appropriately cited. However, some issues remain:
- The hook calls Douglas Kennedy an American author, but the Flyover article doesn't describe Douglas Kennedy as an American author (or provide a citation for such description). This information and a citation for it should be added, per WP:DYKCITE (
The facts of the hook in the article should be cited no later than the end of the sentence in which they appear
). - The article doesn't have the necessary citation no later than the end of the sentence in which the fact appears for the book portraying part of the United States becoming a theocracy. There should be a citation no later than the end of the sentence verifying this fact about the book:
In contrast, the United Confederacy, adopting the old Confederate flag and formed by the former Republican Party supporters, operates as a Christian theocracy across the Midwest and the South and bans not only abortion and sex change, but also divorce; offending religious feelings is a cause for the death penalty, often enacted through burning at the stake. Minneapolis has become a semi-neutral territory and a divided city, reminiscent of the divided Berlin of the Cold War era.
- I just remembered that the Manual of Style favors "United States" or "US" but not "USA", so I would recommend the hook use "United States" or "US" but not "USA".
- The hook calls Douglas Kennedy an American author, but the Flyover article doesn't describe Douglas Kennedy as an American author (or provide a citation for such description). This information and a citation for it should be added, per WP:DYKCITE (
- These remain minor issues that I think can be amended readily, so I'm still ready to approve the nomination once they're resolved. Please ping me when you feel these matters are addressed so I can complete the review. Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 15:39, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- Hydrangeans, I added a ref for an American writer; could I perhaps ask you to fix the remaining minor issues you mention? I am on holiday now with limited access to the net and time for wiki-stuff for the next few weeks (or until I figure out a solution to this technical issue, i.e. find a better computer, connection, and time). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 09:41, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- Can do; sorry to trouble you on your holiday. I think the matters are minor enough—primarily visual and formal—that it's reasonable for me to implement them, and I've done so.
With all remaining matters resolved, the nomination, and hook ALT 2, are approved. Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 16:10, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- Hydrangeans, I added a ref for an American writer; could I perhaps ask you to fix the remaining minor issues you mention? I am on holiday now with limited access to the net and time for wiki-stuff for the next few weeks (or until I figure out a solution to this technical issue, i.e. find a better computer, connection, and time). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 09:41, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Piotrus: Thanks for the responsiveness. Flyover being a science fiction novel is now appropriately cited. However, some issues remain:
Praetoria of Constantinople
- ... that in the Praetorium of Constantinople the brothers Theodorus and Theophanes (pictured) had twelve iambic verses branded on their forehead and torso?
- Source: Senina (2008), pp. 267-268
- Reviewed: Red Sea mangroves
- Comment: I will do the QPQ asap.
Alex2006 (talk) 16:11, 20 May 2024 (UTC).
- @Alessandro57: You still need to provide a QPQ as it has been over two weeks since the nomination. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:03, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
@Narutolovehinata5: you are right, sorry, QPQ done. Alex2006 (talk) 05:56, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: AGF on non-English sources, although was able to verify the basic facts elsewhere. Only concern would be the last sentence of the introduction: "At least two buildings with this function existed in the city". It is unclear if this is talking about jails, or places where the prefect dispensed justice. @Alessandro57: - Are you able to address this? CSJJ104 (talk) 16:28, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
You are right, @CSJJ104:, it wasn't clear, thanks. Updated everywhere with sources. Alex2006 (talk) 11:10, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Alessandro57: Reading this with the recent additions, is the article intended to cover both buildings, or just the one? If it's covering both then possibly it should be moved to Praetoria of Constantinople, otherwise the article should make clear which building it covers. CSJJ104 (talk) 12:49, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
Hallo @CSJJ104:, your concern has been addressed: article moved to plural. Cheers, Alex2006 (talk) 14:20, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Performed a copyedit on the lead, but otherwise good to go. I assume good faith on the non-English sources. CSJJ104 (talk) 17:55, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- Note that I've nominated the image for deletion. All that means is that this can't become the lead hook; no other issues. Schwede66 06:11, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Alessandro57: Reading this with the recent additions, is the article intended to cover both buildings, or just the one? If it's covering both then possibly it should be moved to Praetoria of Constantinople, otherwise the article should make clear which building it covers. CSJJ104 (talk) 12:49, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 21[edit]
Pascal Maynard
- ... that Magic: The Gathering player Pascal Maynard (pictured), criticized for drafting a card to sell rather than play, founded a Magic card store?
- Source: https://dotesports.com/general/news/pascal-maynard-tarmogoyf-magic-the-gathering-2014 - " Pascal Maynard ... had finally made Top 8, the final table, at Magic’s largest tournament in history and came face to face with one of the most valuable cards in the set. And it was absolutely useless for him. ... Pros seemed outraged that a player calling himself professional would choose the money over a better chance at winning." https://monsaintroch.com/2020/nouvel-univers-magique-jeux-saint-roch/ "Le quartier Saint-Roch accueille depuis la mi-octobre une boutique de jeux .... Projet de Pascal Maynard, La Boutique Mythique propose des jeux de cartes, principalement Magic the Gathering." transl. "Since mid-October, the Saint-Roch district has been home to a game store ... A project of Pascal Maynard, La Boutique Mythique offers card games, mainly Magic the Gathering."
GRuban (talk) 13:57, 24 May 2024 (UTC).
This is my first DYK review so take my comments with a grain of salt. The article is long enough. The article was moved to mainspace 21 May, so is is new enough. I am also not sure if a layman would understand the term "drafting." QPQ is done. The sources are reliable enough. The hook is interesting to me. The image is fine. I think the article is good; personally I think the early life section is very small and should probably be merged into something else. I also think the very first sentence of the article should be with the rest of the opening paragraph to make it look more presentable. Since this is my first DYK review, I am requesting a second opinion on this. Kimikel (talk) 02:51, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- On second thought I think the hook would more interesting and cohesive if it just focused on the first part. Could be something like "that 'Magic: The Gathering' player Pascal Maynard (pictured) was criticized for selecting a valuable card over a strategic/competitive one in a tournament?" that way its accessible to a general audience and is more focused than the original. again this is my first review so take with a grain of salt. Kimikel (talk) 12:29, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Kimikel: Reasonable hook suggestions, thank you. Let's formalize them, and let me add a third based on your second:
- ALT1 ... that Magic: The Gathering player Pascal Maynard (pictured), criticized for selecting a card to sell rather than play, founded a Magic card store?
- ALT2 ... that Magic: The Gathering player Pascal Maynard (pictured), was criticized for selecting a valuable card over a competitive one in a tournament?
- ALT3 ... that Pascal Maynard (pictured), picked a card to sell, rather than play, at the largest Magic: The Gathering tournament in history?
- Citation for that last bit: https://dotesports.com/general/news/pascal-maynard-tarmogoyf-magic-the-gathering-2014 "He had finally made Top 8, the final table, at Magic’s largest tournament in history and came face to face with one of the most valuable cards in the set."
- I moved text around to expand the "Early life" section: better? --GRuban (talk) 13:58, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Approving ALT2 and ALT3. Article looks great and both hooks meet criteria and are well-written. Thank you GRuban! Kimikel (talk) 16:49, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- Please note that the image license is dodgy. Kimikel, that's not something that I would expect a newbie to detect, hence please don't worry about that. I've posted a comment to the uploader's user page; let's see what they've got to say. Without this being sorted, this can obviously proceed without the image. Schwede66 06:24, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
- Dodgyness sorted. --GRuban (talk) 10:48, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
- Please note that the image license is dodgy. Kimikel, that's not something that I would expect a newbie to detect, hence please don't worry about that. I've posted a comment to the uploader's user page; let's see what they've got to say. Without this being sorted, this can obviously proceed without the image. Schwede66 06:24, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 24[edit]
List of Green Bay Packers Associated Press All-Pro selections
... that the only first-team AP All-Pro for the Green Bay Packers the last two seasons was kick returner Keisean Nixon?
- Reviewed: Peter Demetz
« Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:18, 24 May 2024 (UTC).
Probably needs a new hook as readers who aren't NFL fans or very familiar with American football may not see the interest of this hook. If a reader does not know what an "AP All-Pro" is or its significance, they won't find the hook interesting. Rejecting ALT0 per WP:DYKINT as well as the old supplementary guidelines (i.e. don't assume all readers are familiar with the sport you're talking about). Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:43, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the only Green Bay Packers' player recognized by the Associated Press as a first-team All-Pro the last two seasons was kick returner Keisean Nixon? « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:01, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
. Requesting a second opinion. By writing out "Associated Press" and adding "recognized" helps clarify that this is a national recognition. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:03, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
Will probably have to disagree here. Readers might still not necessarily get what it means to be an "All-Pro" or how it is a big deal. Historically, our sports hooks have tended to underperform and be criticized as only appealing to sports fans, and I can't see how this hook or angle is any different. A completely different angle is probably needed here. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 15:14, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
. Requesting a second opinion. I.e. from another editor please. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:14, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Gonzo fan2007: What about something like:
- ALT2: ... that the Green Bay Packers once had 14 players selected to the national All-Pro team?
- I don't necessarily love the current hook, but I think the article has potential for something interesting to be picked out from it. Hey man im josh (talk) 11:59, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
- I'm fine with ALT2 hey man im josh. Thank you. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:08, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
- For anyone reading, I'm commenting for clarity that I am not reviewing this nomination, I just proposed an alternative hook. This still needs a reviewer. Hey man im josh (talk) 11:40, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
- I'm fine with ALT2 hey man im josh. Thank you. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:08, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
needs a review on ALT2. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:46, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
The whole article needs a review.--Launchballer 17:54, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:04, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. Nice work. I think ALT2 is interesting enough and so that one is approved. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:29, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
Avatar Studios (production company)
- ... that Avatar Studios is developing three animated films set in the world of Avatar: The Last Airbender?
- ALT1: ... that Avatar Studios, a production company dedicated to developing new projects set in the world of Avatar: The Last Airbender, was launched in 2021? Source: https://variety.com/2021/tv/news/avatar-last-airbender-legend-of-korra-nickelodeon-1234914149/
- Reviewed:
Zingo156 (talk) 16:38, 24 May 2024 (UTC).
- This looks on track. No QPQ required. Article meets requirements as far as length and sourcing. ALT1 will age a little better, but there might be a clearer way to phrase it. Did you want to take a shot at re-working it a bit? I don't mind trying to help. Shooterwalker (talk) 16:25, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- "Did you know that in 2021, Nickelodeon launched Avatar Studios to produce new projects set in the world of Avatar: The Last Airbender". Does that work? Zingo156 (talk) 13:39, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
- That is much improved. Approving ALT1a:
- ALT1a ... that in 2021, Nickelodeon launched Avatar Studios to produce new projects set in the world of Avatar: The Last Airbender?
- Good work. Shooterwalker (talk) 20:43, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
- Shooterwalker, if you are approving this nomination, you need to use the appropriate icon to indicate this and so the bot can tell the review is complete. If you aren't, what else might need to be done? Have you completed the neutrality and copyvio checks? The hook sourcing check? Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:47, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
- My mistake, and I can give it the approval icon.
I can confirm this meets all the requirements, including copyvio and WP:NPOV. I am standing by in case there is anything else. Shooterwalker (talk) 18:34, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
- My mistake, and I can give it the approval icon.
- Shooterwalker, if you are approving this nomination, you need to use the appropriate icon to indicate this and so the bot can tell the review is complete. If you aren't, what else might need to be done? Have you completed the neutrality and copyvio checks? The hook sourcing check? Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:47, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
- That is much improved. Approving ALT1a:
- "Did you know that in 2021, Nickelodeon launched Avatar Studios to produce new projects set in the world of Avatar: The Last Airbender". Does that work? Zingo156 (talk) 13:39, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 25[edit]
73 Yards
- ... that "73 Yards" is one of the few Doctor Who episodes not to feature the theme music and title sequence?
- ALT1: ... that Sex Education was still in production when filming on the fourteenth series of Doctor Who began causing Ncuti Gatwa to be absent from most of "73 Yards"? Source: https://screenrant.com/doctor-who-season-14-episode-4-doctor-missing-filming-explained-rtd/
- ALT2: ... that real broadcast journalists were used as extras for the portions of the Doctor Who episode "73 Yards" that were filmed at the BBC Cymru Wales New Broadcasting House? Source: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3EftAeJcCBo
- Reviewed: N/A (second nomination)
- Comment: User:Alex 21 moved the article to the mainspace. While I am the primary author, a few other editors have contributed significantly to the article.
TheDoctorWho (talk) 17:00, 26 May 2024 (UTC).
- @TheDoctorWho: I would like to propose a few alt hooks as the second overall editor to the page. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 00:01, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that the Doctor is barely in the Doctor Who episode "73 Yards"?
Source: https://www.denofgeek.com/tv/doctor-who-why-ncuti-gatwas-doctor-isnt-in-73-yards/
- ALT4: ... that the Doctor Who episode "73 Yards" is only the fourth episode in the history of the show to omit the theme song? Source: https://www.hollywoodreporter.com/tv/tv-features/doctor-who-mid-season-questions-73-yards-explained-1235908268/
- Thank you for the extra ALT hooks! I originally had something similar to ALT4 drafted up, but I rewrote it because the source doesn't explicitly state that it was the fourth episode to omit it. While I don't dispute it's a fact, we only have two separate sources that previously three other previous episodes that exclude it, but not that those are the only three. It was a slight case of WP:SYNTH and should probably be re-written in the article, unless such a source exists. That said, I don't have a problem with ALT3 if a reviewer chooses to accept it, but I do of course have a slight preference for the ones that I wrote 😅. TheDoctorWho (talk) 04:16, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
Approving all five hooks. Article is long enough, neutral, well-written, free from copyvio, and was posted to mainspace a day before DYK submission. All five hooks are written well, sourced, and interesting. No QPQ needed. Thank you for the submission TheDoctorwho and OlifanofmrTennant Kimikel (talk) 22:26, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 26[edit]
Ludwig Krug
- ... that German sculptor Ludwig Krug created a limestone relief depicting Adam and Eve in the fall of man (pictured)?
- Source: "Adam and Eve (The Fall)". Google Arts & Culture. Retrieved 26 May 2024.
SL93 (talk) 10:02, 26 May 2024 (UTC).
- ALT1 ... that German sculptor Ludwig Krug created a limestone relief featuring an ape that symbolizes the yearning of flesh being the cause of the biblical fall of man (pictured)? SL93 (talk) 22:43, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
Article is long enough and was published to mainspace same day as DYK submission. It's well-sourced and copyvio free. The first hook is interesting, and the image meets criteria and adds to the hook. ALT1 is a little too wordy in my opinion, I think the original is better. Hook source is good. QPQ done. However, the last paragraph of the article is written in a stilted way, with semicolons connecting too many ideas, leading to it becoming difficult to read by the end. I would recommend going back and breaking some of those ideas up to make it easier to read, or at least adding "and" in front of the Solnhofen Limestone part. Other than that, there's nothing else that needs to be corrected. Kimikel (talk) 19:50, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- Kimikel I have edited the paragraph. SL93 (talk) 00:53, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Approving the original hook. Thank you for your submission SL93. Kimikel (talk) 03:17, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- Kimikel I have edited the paragraph. SL93 (talk) 00:53, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 30[edit]
List of individual body parts
- ... that the Sourtoe (pictured) is one of many body parts found around the world?
- ALT1: ... that a toe used for cocktails (pictured) is one of many body parts found around the world?
- ALT2: ... that a human toe (pictured) is one of many body parts that are tourist attractions? "Up in the far north of Canada, there is a bar where you can order a shot of whiskey garnished with a real human toe."
- ALT3: ... that body parts such as arm bones (example pictured) are sometimes placed in arm-shaped reliquaries? Source: ...while a fragment of the bone in his left arm was eventually transferred to San Domenico Maggiore in Naples, where it is still preserved inside an arm-shaped reliquary made of bronze, silver and glass in the church’s Sacred Relics Chamber.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Melanie L. Campbell
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Overall: Everything looks good to me! A very interesting list. Preference is for either toe hook. Noting that DYK Check shows less than 1500 characters, but the text in the list proper is well over the limit — Chris Woodrich (talk) 20:45, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
In its current form, we'd have to IAR this as the prose size is 18 bytes short of the 1500 bytes limit. But I agree that there is so much (valuable) prose in the table that this should be ok. I shall note that the toe image is not in focus and thus recommend against using it. Schwede66 06:29, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on May 31[edit]
Republica weatbrooki, Republica (plant)
- ... that while both are named from the same place, the genus Republica (pictured) is not the genus Republica?
- Source: Archibald & Cannings 2021 doi:10.11646/zootaxa.4966.3.11 materials and methods for location data "We examined a single fossil in lacustrine shale recovered from exposure B4131 of the Tom Thumb Tuff Member
of the Klondike Mountain Formation at Republic, Washington, U.S.A."
Wolfe & Wehr 1987 doi:10.3133/b1597 page 2 fig 1 shows the location in Republic of site 8428 of the Klondike Mountain Formation, page 22 gives the genus etymology and 23 the type locality occurrence in Republic- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Buellia aethalea
- Comment: Also reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Calamophyton
Kevmin § 00:13, 31 May 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: My first time reviewing a dual-article nomination, and I appreciate the effort which must have gone into it!
Both articles moved to mainspace yesterday. QPQ is done. No plagiarism detected via Earwig. For both articles, length, referencing and image licensing are all good. For the insect, I think that the first paragraph of "Description" and of "Paleoenvironment" are both a bit long and ought to be split up a bit, and that "Paleoenvironment" should have at least one image - even the location map over at Klondike Mountain Formation would be really helpful. For the plant, you really should move the distribution images a couple of paragraphs down to avoid MOS:SANDWICH, and the last sentence of the lead is missing a period. Still, I would not hold up the nomination for those reasons alone.
To me, it is the hook which has multiple significant issues. It may not be grammatically correct (shouldn't it be named after the same place, not named from the same place
?), it is really confusing and vague, as you have no way to tell what place is actually being referred to without clicking on both links, and I feel that a lot of readers would just say "So what?" when they see it as currently written. Suggested wording: Alt1 "...that extinct plants and damselflies from the Eocene were discovered and named after Republic in Washington?"
I also think that both articles should have a sentence which makes this connection between the two more explicit than the mere hatnote at the top. Lastly, you should at least add DOI and ISBN links to your DYK citations. Right now, there is no way to tell which citation refers to which fossil without going through the articles' references, and we should not have to do that. InformationToKnowledge (talk) 13:05, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
- InformationToKnowledge The hook as written is a play on the hemihomonym use of the genus name Republica for both a plant and an animal, but I like alt1 as well. I've added the dois for each source and a map to Republica weatbrooki, plus added splits in the Description and Paleoenvironment sections. A sentence calling out the hemihomonymy has been added to each article under classification. The image/map placement for Republics (plant) is more problematic though. I edit on a wide screen desktop monitor, and my view of the article has the maps already almost all the way down to the start of References. Ideally I was wanting a single map, but I wasn't able to find one I could make work for the West coast sites plus Alaska.--Kevmin § 18:37, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
- Taking conciseness into account and a matching the details of the articles:
Alt2 "...that fossil plants (pictured) and damselflies from the Ypresian were named after Republic in Washington state?"
- Kevmin OK, that addresses all my concerns. Thanks for the prompt response! InformationToKnowledge (talk) 17:24, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Kevmin and InformationToKnowledge: Whereas the original hook is one of the most eye-catching I have seen in a while, ALT2 is rather averagely dull. Can we not try to get the original to working order? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:25, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- The information for Alt0 is present in both articles, based on the original descriptions of each.--Kevmin § 16:46, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- Hopefully the reviewer InformationToKnowledge feels the same. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:54, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- We may be waiting a while for them, as they haven't edited since the 14th, and the frequency of edits was tapering off before that.--Kevmin § 18:15, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- Hopefully the reviewer InformationToKnowledge feels the same. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:54, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- The information for Alt0 is present in both articles, based on the original descriptions of each.--Kevmin § 16:46, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Kevmin and InformationToKnowledge: Whereas the original hook is one of the most eye-catching I have seen in a while, ALT2 is rather averagely dull. Can we not try to get the original to working order? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:25, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- Kevmin OK, that addresses all my concerns. Thanks for the prompt response! InformationToKnowledge (talk) 17:24, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 1[edit]
Rosemary Miller
- ... that Rosemary Miller tried out skeet shooting in 1961, won her state's championship in 1962, and then won a state shooting championship all but two years for the rest of her life?
- Source: started in 1961 won championship in 1962 - 63 and 64, before skipping 65 ([7]) - 66 through 74 with the exception of 73 (won by Isabelle Thompson) - died in 1974
BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:03, 8 June 2024 (UTC).
Article is new enough, long enough, and within policy. The first two parts of the hook are verified, but I am having trouble understanding the last part of the hook. The wording is confusing. We need a new hook.4meter4 (talk) 15:27, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
- @4meter4: What I am trying to communicate is that, after she first entered the championship in 1962, there were only two years for the rest of her life that she did not win a state shooting championship. Can you think of a better way to word it? I also added a QPQ. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:47, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11 and 4meter4: ALT1 ... that after winning her state's skeet shooting championship in 1962, Rosemary Miller won a state shooting championship in all but two years for the rest of her life? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 03:09, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
- Works for me. Approving Alt1:
.4meter4 (talk) 14:50, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5 and 4meter4: I do think it adds some interest that the championship was one year after she first learned the sport. What about: ALT2 ... that Rosemary Miller won her state's skeet shooting championship one year after learning the sport, and then won a state shooting championship in all but two years for the rest of her life? Or something like that. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:32, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- Works for me. Approving Alt1:
Chenqiao mutiny
- ... that according to the official history of the Song dynasty, Zhao Kuangyin's soldiers stormed his bedroom and surprised him by proclaiming him emperor?
- Source: Hung, Hing Ming (2014). Ten States, Five Dynasties, One Great Emperor. Algora Publishing. ISBN 978-1-62894-072-5.
- Reviewed:
Lyn1644 (talk) 23:43, 1 June 2024 (UTC).
AGF on the source, as I don't have access to it. Article is eligible, in good shape (fully cited, well written), and I can't find any evidence of copyvio. No QPQ needed. Looks like we're good to go here. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 02:50, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- I suggest this image not be used; it renders poorly at small size. RoySmith (talk) 20:24, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Can we please have a quote from the offline source that states the hook fact? If something is offline, that should be provided for the reviewer. Schwede66 06:36, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 2[edit]
Dot and Bubble
- ... that the Doctor Who episode "Dot and Bubble" is inspired by Black Mirror?
- ALT1: ... that the Doctor Who episode "Dot and Bubble" does not focus on the Doctor? Source: https://www.gamesradar.com/entertainment/sci-fi-shows/doctor-who-season-1-episode-5-dot-and-bubble-review-recap/
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Auto Dollar
Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 03:45, 2 June 2024 (UTC).
- ALT2: ... that the 2024 Doctor Who episode "Dot and Bubble" was first conceptualized in 2009? Source: https://www.radiotimes.com/tv/sci-fi/dot-bubble-doctor-who-black-mirror-newsupdate/
- Just wanted to provide a second ALT to pick from
. TheDoctorWho (talk) 04:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
Comment: @OlifanofmrTennant: The episode is not "'inspired by' Black Mirror", the source states nothing about inspiration and neither does the article, so please stop adding it here and in the article. ภץאคгöร 10:04, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
Approving ALT1 and ALT2, with preference towards ALT2. Article is long enough and was moved to mainspace a day before DYK nomination. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and copyvio-free. ALT1 and ALT2 are both interesting and sourced, though I found ALT2 more interesting. ALT0 not approved due to above reason. QPQ done. Thank you for the nomination TheDoctorWho and Olifanofmrtennant - Kimikel (talk) 01:43, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
Talbot H. Green
- ... that one of the streets in San Francisco is named after a man who was using a false identity?
- Source: Hussey, John Adam (March 1939). New Light upon Talbot H. Green: As Revealed by His Own Letters and Other Sources. University of California Press.
- Reviewed:
Jacob0790 (talk) 20:23, 3 June 2024 (UTC).
- I note that at the time the street was named (circa 1850) it was not known to the people of San Francisco that Green was using a false identity. Might want to adjust the verb tense to reflect that. For instance "after a man who was using a false identity?" Erp (talk) 00:31, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- Makes sense, Erp. Thanks, Jacob0790 (talk) 00:38, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
- I wonder if giving a tiny bit more detail might help. "that Green Street in San Francisco is named after a respected local businessman who was using a false identity to evade justice?". Erp (talk) 03:09, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- I believe it's up to reviewers. They will definitely take it in consideration Jacob0790 (talk) 22:19, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- I wonder if giving a tiny bit more detail might help. "that Green Street in San Francisco is named after a respected local businessman who was using a false identity to evade justice?". Erp (talk) 03:09, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- Makes sense, Erp. Thanks, Jacob0790 (talk) 00:38, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
@Jacob0790: Article is long enough and submitted same day as DYK submission. The hook is very interesting and well-sourced, though I would word it slightly differently [see below]. The article is neutral, presentable, and well-sourced. No QPQ needed. Please let me know if you accept my rewording:
- ALT1: ... that a street in San Francisco was named after a man that was using a false identity?
Kimikel (talk) 00:39, 30 June 2024 (UTC) - ALT2: ... that a street in San Francisco was named after a man who was using a false identity?
Thanks, Erp and Kimikel!
Jacob0790 (talk) 01:05, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Approving ALT2. Thank you for your submission Jacob0790! Kimikel (talk) 01:22, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Nexz
- ... that the Japanese boy band Nexz was created through the program Nizi Project season 2?
lullabying (talk) 22:15, 2 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Article is new enough, long enough. QPQ is done. AGF on the Japanese- and Korean-language sources for plagiarism etc. Hook isn't the most earth shattering, but it does seem to be the most interesting fact in the article. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:40, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 3[edit]
LACE (satellite)
- ... that the Low-power Atmospheric Compensation Experiment (LACE) (pictured) was the first Department of Defense satellite launched on a commercial launch vehicle?
- ALT1: ... that the 150 ft (46m) long retractable booms on the LACE satellite (pictured) were the longest ever put in space at the time of launch?
- Source: Amato, Ivan. "13". Taking Technology Higher The Naval Center for Space Technology and the Making of the Space Age (p. 252)
https://www.nrl.navy.mil/Portals/38/PDF%20Files/Taking_Technology_Higher_Amato.pdf "In the initial days and weeks after the LACE launch, he and colleagues spent many hours at the Blossom Point ground station in southern Maryland checking the spacecraft’s systems, which included, among other superlatives, the longest retractable
booms that had ever flown in space"- ALT2: ... that the Ultraviolet Plume Instrument onboard the LACE satellite (pictured) tracked rocket plumes from space for the United States's Star Wars program?
- Source: Naval Research Laboratory (October 1, 1991). "LACE" (PDF). Defense Technical Information Center. Washington DC: Naval Research Laboratory. Retrieved April 4, 2024.
https://apps.dtic.mil/sti/pdfs/ADA339075.pdf (p. 2): "SDIO [Strategic Defense Initiative Organization] began discussing the addition of an instrument to take video images of rocket plumes by their UV emission."
Images on pp. 20-22, some color versions at https://web.archive.org/web/20070916140820/http://code8200.nrl.navy.mil/uvpi.html, or on Commons- Reviewed:
- Comment: Hook: technically LACE was launched alongside another "Star Wars" satellite as a dual payload on the same rocket, however, LACE was deployed first so it still was the "first" satellite launched/deployed in the mission
AltHook: I would love to say that these were the longest booms *ever* deployed in space, but I haven't found any up-to-date sources or papers stating that.
AltHook2: "Star Wars" is the popular nickname for the Strategic Defense Initiative program
SpacePod9 (talk) 08:47, 6 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: main, ALT1 and ALT2 all verified Hawkeye7 (discuss) 01:00, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
The image is of marginal quality. I don't think we should use it. RoySmith (talk) 20:37, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 4[edit]
Titan: The Life of John D. Rockefeller, Sr.
- ... that according to a biography of John D. Rockefeller, "At times ... Rockefeller sounded more like Karl Marx than our classical image of the capitalist"?
- Source: "Chernow proposes a shrewder thought: 'At times, when he railed against cutthroat competition and the vagaries of the business cycle, Rockefeller sounded more like Karl Marx than our classical image of the capitalist.'" Morrow, Lance. (June 15, 1998) "Oil in the family". Time Magazine. Vol. 151, no. 23.
- Source: "The archivist then brought out this 1700-page transcript of an interview that had been privately commissioned by the family in the nineteen-teens, privately conducted over a three-year period ... I read about twenty-five pages of that interview, closed it, and called my editor, and said I was doing the book." Frumkes, Lewis. (January 1999). "A Conversation With ... Ron Chernow". Writer. Vol. 112, No. 1.
DrOrinScrivello (talk) 16:21, 4 June 2024 (UTC).
Article is long enough and new enough (moved to mainspace same day as DYK nom). It's well-written, free from copyvio, and well-sourced. Both hooks are interesting and sourced, although the sources are inaccessible. QPQ is done. Approving on good faith. Thank you for the submission! Kimikel (talk) 00:50, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 5[edit]
Nathan Steuer
- ... that Nathan Steuer (pictured) started tournament-level Magic: The Gathering as a pre-teen, saying the "13 and up" on Magic packaging was "just recommended"?
- Source: https://magic.gg/news/the-week-that-was-the-greatest-steuer-ever-told "The year was 2015, and young Nathan Steuer was playing in his first-ever Grand Prix Day Two."
- https://web.archive.org/web/20210513172806/https://magic.wizards.com/en/events/coverage/gpsd15/magical-futures-2015-08-09 "We used to tease him about the ‘13 and up' on Magic packaging until he cracked back ‘It's just recommended'." https://magic.gg/news/the-week-that-was-the-greatest-steuer-ever-told
- ALT1: ... that Magic: The Gathering world champion Nathan Steuer (pictured) started tournament-level play as a pre-teen, saying the "13 and up" on Magic packaging was "just recommended"?
- Same content just a bit more explicit about why he's a big deal.
GRuban (talk) 14:00, 5 June 2024 (UTC).
@GRuban: QPQ is done. Article is long enough and moved to mainspace same day as DYK submission. Hooks are both interesting and sourced correctly; I prefer ALT1. Article is presentable and free from copyvio. I have two minor issues with the article's citations: 1) I added a citation needed tag, and 2) the article uses X as a source. Other than those two things, there's nothing else needed for approval. Kimikel (talk) 01:13, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Kimikel: 1) Cited where requested. 2) X is OK per WP:ABOUTSELF, specifically it's a post from the Ultimate Guard company that says that Steuer is now a member of Team Ultimate Guard, which is the fact that it is backing up. There are other sources that also say it, but this is the one from the horse's mouth, so to speak. --GRuban (talk) 13:28, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
Appproving both hooks, preference towards ALT1. Concerns addressed. Thank you GRuban - Kimikel (talk) 14:09, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Kimikel: 1) Cited where requested. 2) X is OK per WP:ABOUTSELF, specifically it's a post from the Ultimate Guard company that says that Steuer is now a member of Team Ultimate Guard, which is the fact that it is backing up. There are other sources that also say it, but this is the one from the horse's mouth, so to speak. --GRuban (talk) 13:28, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
Chihiro (song)
- ... that "Chihiro" by Billie Eilish was titled in reference to the main character of Spirited Away? Source: ref: "Chihiro" is named after the protagonist from Hayao Miyazaki's 2001 film "Spirited Away," a fantastical coming-of-age journey that's been widely celebrated for its multi-layered storytelling and animation style.
- Reviewed:
dxneo (talk) 23:45, 5 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: earwig gives 41%, but the copied text is a cited quote from Eilish. the image is fine, but i'd suggest using a newer photo for both this hook and for the article. there are quite a few good ones here: c:Category:Billie Eilish - O2 Arena - 6/16/2022. i'd also suggest adding Eilish's name somewhere in the hook, e.g. Billie Eilish's "Chihiro". overall, good work. ... sawyer * he/they * talk 22:26, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you Sawyer. However, I'm afraid changing the image might later be marked as a breach of WP:DYKIMG which is what happened here, but if you think I should go through with it then I'll gladly replace the image. dxneo (talk) 00:09, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- dxneo i understand that. my suggestion is that you change the image both in the hook and the article to something newer (as the current picture is from when she was 16), but as i said it's just a suggestion from me, and not something holding back the hook. i believe all of the photos from the category i linked are CC BY 2.0, which is perfectly suitable. ... sawyer * he/they * talk 00:39, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- Sawyer, no problem. Most of the images listed in that category do not have description, which is making it difficult to add the image in the article. Please feel free to go on ahead and replace the image. dxneo (talk) 00:52, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- dxneo done - found an image that also has both Billie and Finneas performing together, to keep the same vibe. hope it suits you :) ... sawyer * he/they * talk 01:28, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- Sawyer, no problem. Most of the images listed in that category do not have description, which is making it difficult to add the image in the article. Please feel free to go on ahead and replace the image. dxneo (talk) 00:52, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- dxneo i understand that. my suggestion is that you change the image both in the hook and the article to something newer (as the current picture is from when she was 16), but as i said it's just a suggestion from me, and not something holding back the hook. i believe all of the photos from the category i linked are CC BY 2.0, which is perfectly suitable. ... sawyer * he/they * talk 00:39, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
Gedling Town F.C.
- ... that Gedling Town F.C., then competing at the ninth tier of the English football pyramid, was once served by former England international Chris Waddle?
- Source: "Life After the Lane". Tottenham Hotspur F.C. 5 November 2003. Archived from the original on 14 August 2020. Retrieved 9 January 2024.
Curlymanjaro (talk) 12:34, 9 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Article nominated for DYK within 7 days of reaching Good Article status. The article is long enough, has over 1,500 words of prose, and is properly cited. Earwig picked up a copyright violation 0%, maing it unlikely. QPQ is done. AGF on locked sources. The article in general has a lot of red links and I think that, if there are no plans on creating those articles, they should be removed. Hook is cited, but it doesn't seem particularly interesting to people outside of fans of football, so another one is recommended. lullabying (talk) 02:51, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that Gedling Town F.C.'s nickname "The Ferrymen" was inspired by the name of a pub located near the team's stadium?
- @Lullabying and Curlymanjaro: How does this sound? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 11:07, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Lullabying and Narutolovehinata5: Hi both. I based the original hook on a previous DYK of mine. I think it's also fair to say it's difficult to find an interesting fact about a grassroots football team that isn't also about football. However, if we prefer Naruto's suggestion, how about: ... that Gedling Town F.C.'s nickname "The Ferrymen" was inspired by the name of a pub located next to the team's stadium? Curlymanjaro (talk) 22:57, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
I would prefer ALT1 or ALT1b. Good to go. lullabying (talk) 20:46, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Lullabying and Narutolovehinata5: Hi both. I based the original hook on a previous DYK of mine. I think it's also fair to say it's difficult to find an interesting fact about a grassroots football team that isn't also about football. However, if we prefer Naruto's suggestion, how about: ... that Gedling Town F.C.'s nickname "The Ferrymen" was inspired by the name of a pub located next to the team's stadium? Curlymanjaro (talk) 22:57, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 6[edit]
María Pacheco
- ... that after the death of her husband, María Pacheco led the Revolt of the Comuneros in Toledo?
- Source: *Fink De Backer, Stephanie (2004). "Rebel with a Cause: The Marriage of María Pacheco and the Formation of Mendoza Identity". In Nader, Helen (ed.). Power and Gender in Renaissance Spain: Eight Women of the Mendoza Family, 1450-1650. University of Illinois Press. pp. 79–81. ISBN 0-252-02868-6.
- ALT1: ... that plants have had difficulty growing in the centre of Toledo since 1522, when Spanish royalists salted the earth where María Pacheco had led the Revolt of the Comuneros? Source: *Fink De Backer, Stephanie (2004). "Rebel with a Cause: The Marriage of María Pacheco and the Formation of Mendoza Identity". In Nader, Helen (ed.). Power and Gender in Renaissance Spain: Eight Women of the Mendoza Family, 1450-1650. University of Illinois Press. pp. 81–82. ISBN 0-252-02868-6.
- ALT2: ... that Spanish chroniclers thought María Pacheco, the leader of the Revolt of the Comuneros, was a witch? Source: Fleming, Gillian B. (2018). "Vengeance (1520-1522)". Juana I: Legitimacy and Conflict in Sixteenth-Century Castile. Palgrave Macmillan. p. 270. doi:10.1007/978-3-319-74347-9. ISBN 978-3-319-74346-2.
- ALT3: ... that after Moriscos attended the wedding of María Pacheco, her father claimed it as a sign of his success in promoting religious tolerance, in direct opposition to the Spanish Inquisition? Source: *Fink De Backer, Stephanie (2004). "Rebel with a Cause: The Marriage of María Pacheco and the Formation of Mendoza Identity". In Nader, Helen (ed.). Power and Gender in Renaissance Spain: Eight Women of the Mendoza Family, 1450-1650. University of Illinois Press. pp. 72–73, 77–78. ISBN 0-252-02868-6.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Gladys Stone Wright
Grnrchst (talk) 09:40, 7 June 2024 (UTC).
- Comment – I will review this nomination. – Editør (talk) 09:39, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- Review – The article is new enough (passed as GA on 6 June 2024), long enough (12000+ characters of prose), has no copyright issues, and is presentable (both per Talk:María Pacheco/GA1). The originally proposed hook is cited and interesting. Although the linked source is not available without an account, I was able to confirm the information by other sources [8] [9], so I don't see an issue here. I want to propose an alternative that focuses more on María Pacheco instead of her husband and avoids changing 'Toledo' into the modern 'Toledo, Spain', let me know if there are any issues with ALT4 before I pass it. – Editør (talk) 10:45, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALT4 ... that María Pacheco led the Revolt of the Comuneros in the Kingdom of Toledo after the death of her husband?
- No issues with ALT4, although I personally think ALTs 1, 2 and 3 are more interesting. --Grnrchst (talk) 12:48, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- Ok. I also thought ALT2 was interesting, but I couldn't find an alternative source for this to confirm this information; do you have one? And I would propose to change it to remove the modern 'Spanish' and the article 'the' because there were more leaders into: – Editør (talk) 12:59, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALT5: ... that 16th-century chroniclers thought María Pacheco, a leader of the Revolt of the Comuneros, was a witch?
- Good point about dropping the apocryphal use of "Spanish", I think ALT5 looks good as well. Here's the direct quote from Fleming 2018, p. 270:
--Grnrchst (talk) 13:19, 23 June 2024 (UTC)Her actions drew the ire of contemporary chroniclers, who depict her as a tyrannical virago. Having earlier commented that she dominated her marriage as the “husband of her husband,” Martire links her protagonism to madness, and even to demonic possession; Santa Cruz relates it to witchcraft. Like Juana’s moriscas in earlier days, Pacheco’s were looked upon askance. Fray Guevara describes Pacheco working with a “mad” slave or “great witch,” who stoked her ambitions.
pass ALT5. – Editør (talk) 13:21, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- Good point about dropping the apocryphal use of "Spanish", I think ALT5 looks good as well. Here's the direct quote from Fleming 2018, p. 270:
- ALT5: ... that 16th-century chroniclers thought María Pacheco, a leader of the Revolt of the Comuneros, was a witch?
- Ok. I also thought ALT2 was interesting, but I couldn't find an alternative source for this to confirm this information; do you have one? And I would propose to change it to remove the modern 'Spanish' and the article 'the' because there were more leaders into: – Editør (talk) 12:59, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- No issues with ALT4, although I personally think ALTs 1, 2 and 3 are more interesting. --Grnrchst (talk) 12:48, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALT4 ... that María Pacheco led the Revolt of the Comuneros in the Kingdom of Toledo after the death of her husband?
Articles created/expanded on June 8[edit]
Radiosoul
- ... that Alfie Templeman's studio album Radiosoul mainly focuses on his shift from adolescence to early adulthood, as well as his move to London?
- Source: From Rolling Stone UK: "While debut album Mellow Moon was written entirely alone during the pandemic, work on Radiosoul began when Templeman was in the process of moving out of his parents’ house and to London with his partner. Album highlight 'Beckham' playfully details his struggles with London’s exhausting rental market, as he details all the neighbourhoods he tried to live in. [...] He ended up living in none of them, but has now set up a new life in the capital that feels as representative of his move into adulthood as his new album. [...] After the pandemic lifted for most people, Templeman’s lung condition meant he had to isolate further, missing out on more pivotal teenage years. 'Everyone was coming out of their shell, whereas I was waiting,' he recalls. 'Things are about to change, and it’ll all be really amazing, but I can’t think about it too much. It was the same case with the album.'
- ALT1: ... that Alfie Templeman described the style of his studio album Radiosoul as "incohesively cohesive"? Source: From Dork: "Radiosoul pinballs around as many genres as possible in eleven tracks without it feeling like you’ve got whiplash when the song changes. 'The whole idea of it was to essentially make a double album in a single album,' says Alfie of his motive this time. 'Just make as many different kinds of songs and piece it all together and make it sound somewhat cohesive. I always said it was incohesively cohesive, even though that makes no sense whatsoever. I had so many different genres in my head that I wanted to go to.'
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/KUER-FM
Oltrepier (talk) 07:27, 14 June 2024 (UTC).
- Comment London is one of the things you aren't supposed to link. Removed lk. Johnbod (talk) 13:16, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
Approving ALT1. Article is long enough and was moved to mainspace 6 days prior to DYK submission. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and, aside from its block quotes, are copyvio free. The hooks are both good and sourced; of the two, I feel ALT1 is far more intriguing. QPQ done. Thank you for your submission Oltrepier! Kimikel (talk) 01:39, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Hermanus Johannes Lovink
- ... that Dutch agriculturist Hermanus Johannes Lovink (pictured) used a suitcase gramophone during his lectures?
- Source: Poel, JMG van der (12 November 2013). "Lovink, Hermanus Johannes (1866-1938)" (in Dutch). Huygens Institute for the History of the Netherlands. Archived from the original on 8 June 2024. Retrieved 8 June 2024.
- ALT1: ... that the Dutch agriculturist Hermanus Johannes Lovink (pictured) served concurrently as a member of the House of Representatives and as mayor of Alphen aan den Rijn? Source: Poel, JMG van der (12 November 2013). "Lovink, Hermanus Johannes (1866-1938)" (in Dutch). Huygens Institute for the History of the Netherlands. Archived from the original on 8 June 2024. Retrieved 8 June 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/I Am Human (film)
- Comment: Original is a bit tricky; ALT1 included in case it's too misleading.
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 16:51, 8 June 2024 (UTC).
Approving ALT0. Article is long enough and was created same day as DYK nomination. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and copyvio-free. Both hooks are sourced; personally, I find ALT0 far more interesting than ALT1. QPQ done. Image meets criteria. Overall, nothing there for me to comment on. Thank you for your nomination Chris! Kimikel (talk) 02:01, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 9[edit]
H. J. Lovink Pumping Station
- ... that the H. J. Lovink Pumping Station (pictured), a National Monument of the Netherlands, is adorned with a terracotta tableau?
- Source: "Gemaal H.J. Lovink" [H.J. Lovink Pumping Station]. Rijksmonumentenregister (in Dutch). Ministry of Education, Culture and Science. Archived from the original on 10 December 2023. Retrieved 8 May 2024.
- ALT1: ... that the H. J. Lovink Pumping Station (pictured), a National Monument of the Netherlands, was used to reclaim the Flevopolder? Source: "Gemaal H.J. Lovink" [H.J. Lovink Pumping Station]. Rijksmonumentenregister (in Dutch). Ministry of Education, Culture and Science. Archived from the original on 10 December 2023. Retrieved 8 May 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Sara Houcke
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 16:40, 9 June 2024 (UTC).
Approving both hooks. Article is long enough and created on the day of DYK nomination. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and copy-vio free. Both hooks are interesting and well-sourced. Image meets criteria. QPQ done. Overall nothing to comment on from me. Thank you for your nomination Chris Woodrich! Kimikel (talk) 02:33, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Gordon Cooper (American football)
- ... that football player Gordon Cooper performed so well that "the adjective supply [was] exhausted" in trying to describe him?
- Source: Associated Press
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Judy Kellogg Markowsky
- Comment: Was busy yesterday and forgot to nominate on time; requesting a one day extension per WP:DYKG, which states
The seven-day limit can be extended for a day or two upon request.
BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:24, 17 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: When including the one day extension, the article is indeed new enough. I find the hook to be interested, and the source, being AP, is credible. The fact is also mentioned in the article. Marking as approved. Hey man im josh (talk) 14:11, 27 June 2024 (UTC) Hey man im josh (talk) 14:11, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
Hypochrysops piceatus
- ... that the bulloak jewel is arguably Australia's rarest butterfly?
- Source: "Nonetheless, numerically at least, it remains arguably Australia’s rarest butterfly (allowing for the possible extinction of the Australian fritillary, last observed in 2015)." Stafford, Andrew (11 March 2023). "Jewel in the crown land: catching a glimpse of butterfly under threat on a Queensland roadside". The Guardian Australia. The Guardian. Retrieved 8 June 2024.
- ALT1: ... that the Australia’s most threatened butterfly is confined to a native range of under 10 square kilometres (3.9 sq mi)? Source: Page 135 "However, Sands and Braby (2018) recommended that the taxon be listed nationally as Critically Endangered according to IUCN Red List Criteria because the area of occupancy (AOO) is estimated to be less than 10 km2, the geographic range is severely fragmented, and the AOO, and extent and/or quality of its habitat continues to decline." Page 141 "Hypochrysops piceatus is regarded as Australia’s most threatened butterfly (Geyle et al. 2021) and it represents a local iconic threatened species for the Leyburn community, a village where members of the Leyburn Progress Association and Landcare are anxious to enhance historic values and ecotourism (Sands & Braby 2018)." Braby, Michael F.; Samson, Peter R.; Beaver, Ethan P. (22 September 2023). "The Life History of Hypochrysops piceatus Kerr, Macqueen & D.P.A. Sands, 1969 (Lepidoptera: Lycaenidae), a Threatened Butterfly from Australia". The Journal of the Lepidopterists' Society. 77 (3). doi:10.18473/lepi.77i3.a1. Retrieved 9 June 2024.
- Reviewed: Umbilicaria torrefacta
- Comment: This was a really fascinating article to work on! Thank you in advance to the reviewer!
I will complete the QPQ later today.Completed!
Ornithoptera (talk) 20:13, 10 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Was new enough at the time of nomination. Both hooks look good, maybe the first one sounds more interesting. Htanaungg (talk) 10:01, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Last Week Tonight with John Oliver season 4
![Title card of Last Week Tonight with John Oliver](http://upload.luquay.com/wikipedia/commons/thumb/c/c5/Last_Week_Tonight.svg/160px-Last_Week_Tonight.svg.png)
- ... that late-night satirical news show Last Week Tonight with John Oliver received a rare second Peabody Award for its fourth season?
- ALT1: ... that critics described the fourth season of late-night satirical news show Last Week Tonight with John Oliver as comic relief from the activities of the Trump administration? Source: https://www.rottentomatoes.com/tv/last_week_tonight_with_john_oliver/s04/reviews (some text from the individual reviews within)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Justin J. Pearson
MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 19:58, 9 June 2024 (UTC).
Article is long and new enough as well as well written and copyvio-free. However, I would prefer that you cite another reliable, independent source for the critical reception instead of using Rotten Tomatoes, which, while reliable on its own, is not an arbiter of critical consensus; you can still report on the RT scores, though. Hooks are cited both in this page and article, but I prefer ALT1 (that is, with another independent source as I've said) for obvious reasons but with some minor alterations:
- ALT1a: ... that some critics described the fourth season of the late-night satirical news show Last Week Tonight with John Oliver as comic relief from the activities of the Trump administration? Source: The AV club, Bustle
ALT0 seems dull and reliant on readers' knowledge of award-giving bodies. Title card image, which is freely-licensed, seems more decorative than encyclopedic within the context of this DYK, so I seriously doubt it's gonna make it to the main page. Since QPQ has been given, this should be good to go once the issues are addressed. Nineteen Ninety-Four guy (talk) 07:09, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
- Nineteen Ninety-Four guy, thanks for the review: better sources for ALT1 are The AV club and Bustle. ALT1a looks good! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 11:28, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
- Just clump those sources in the article while also rewriting the sentence into, Some critics described the show as necessary comic relief from the activities of the Trump administration., and then remove The fourth season was generally well received from Critical reception and leave the Rotten Tomatoes bit as a standalone sentence. Nineteen Ninety-Four guy (talk) 12:22, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Nineteen Ninety-Four guy: done, thank you! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 12:24, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
Approving ALT1a. Nineteen Ninety-Four guy (talk) 12:30, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Nineteen Ninety-Four guy: done, thank you! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 12:24, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
Sydnie Christmas
- ... that the winner of the seventeenth series of Britain's Got Talent is the first credited woman to win the show without a dog? Source: https://www.whattowatch.com/news/britains-got-talent-winners-629519
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Peewee Jarrett
- Comment: Drive-by nomination, as it's been around 6.875 days since this was converted from a redirect and I want to get this in under the wire. I have a small amount of work to do, starting with the excision of those ugly WP:CLUMPs. Note that I've included 'credited' because, as can quite clearly be seen in the image in the cited source, series 4 winners Spelbound also contained women. Also noting that the majority of this article was created by an IP.
Launchballer 21:58, 9 June 2024 (UTC).
- Review: Newly expanded article from a redirect meeting the required length size of prose. BLP is notable to exist as a standalone article now passing WP:ARTIST. No apparent copyvios. QPQ done. Rest article seems fine. Problem comes with only the fact that this is a synthesis and hence not perfectly verifiable. Do we have any another source mentioning her to be the first woman winner without a dog? Or else, do we have anything else from the article to a new hook? §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 04:52, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
- It's in HuffPost, which I've added back to the article.--Launchballer 08:42, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
Great! All set to go. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 05:02, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
- It's in HuffPost, which I've added back to the article.--Launchballer 08:42, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
Emily Spreeman
- ... that Emily Spreeman, the all-time top scorer for the United States deaf women's national team, played youth soccer with Alex Morgan?
- Source: LAT
- ALT1: ... that Emily Spreeman, the all-time top scorer for the United States women's national deaf soccer team, debuted for the team at the age of 15? Source: U.S. Soccer
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Stacy Hollowell
Hameltion (talk | contribs) 02:05, 9 June 2024 (UTC).
waiting on qpq. no issues otherwise. alt1 is a better hook. ltbdl (talk) 01:51, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Ltbdl: Overlooked that, added. Hameltion (talk | contribs) 04:34, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
good to go. ltbdl (talk) 05:22, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Ltbdl: Overlooked that, added. Hameltion (talk | contribs) 04:34, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 10[edit]
Jopie Roosenburg-Goudriaan, Teun Roosenburg, Oost Castle
- ... that Jopie and Teun Roosenburg led an art colony at Oost Castle (pictured) that helped Jewish refugees escape the Nazi-occupied Netherlands to Belgium?
- Source: Laudy, Yvonne (30 November 1991). "De Gongevaarlijke 'Gekken' van Kasteel Oost" [The Harmless 'Madmen' of Oost Castle]. De Telegraaf (in Dutch). Amsterdam. p. 25.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Great Alaskan Lumberjack Show, Template:Did you know nominations/Nexz, Template:Did you know nominations/Erismatopterus
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:24, 10 June 2024 (UTC).
Approving on good faith. Articles are long enough and new enough, all three QPQs are done. Articles are presentable, well-sourced and free from copyvio. Hook is interesting and source is in Dutch but acceptable on good faith. Image meets criteria. Thank you for the triple nomination Chris Woodrich! Kimikel (talk) 18:39, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Infested
- ... that with the horror film Infested, the French director Sébastien Vaniček wanted to show how not frightening but "complex and beautiful" spiders are?
- ALT1: ... that the French director Sébastien Vaniček conceived the horror film Infested as a social commentary on xenophobia, finding parallels between spiders and banlieue residents? Source: "We don't like that (spiders) have eight legs, and they can move fast, and they can go from this way to this way, they can jump. And that's xenophobia. ... You have this interesting parallel with spiders, because spiders are judged for their appearances, and then people from the suburbs are judged for where they come from."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/In a World...(2nd nomination)
Nineteen Ninety-Four guy (talk) 22:48, 13 June 2024 (UTC).
Article new and long enough at the time of nomination. Length and referencing adequate ("Plot" isn't but that's MOS). No copyvio per Earwig aside from the block of interview quote. Hook interesting, cited inline. Good to go. Juxlos (talk) 16:12, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
Dreamtime (climb)
![The line of the Dreamtime 8C (V15) graded bouldering route is marked in green](http://upload.luquay.com/wikipedia/commons/thumb/5/50/Dreamtime_Boulder_in_Cresciano_-_line.jpg/168px-Dreamtime_Boulder_in_Cresciano_-_line.jpg)
- ... that Dreamtime (pictured) is considered one of the world's most famous bouldering routes?
- Reviewed:
Aszx5000 (talk) 15:44, 10 June 2024 (UTC).
article is long enough, recently promoted to GA and within policy. Hook is short enough and interesting. QPQ not needed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:50, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Aszx5000 and Gonzo fan2007: Comment: Seems like a bold claim. I wonder if we should attribute this claim or bolster it with more robust sources. Or explore a more verifiable hook. Bruxton (talk) 15:14, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- "Considered" and "one of" make this less bold. I think the article supports both assertions, but if the nominator wants to add an additional source to back it up, it wouldn't hurt. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:19, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks all, and here are some additional refs (i.e. Dreamtime and Midnight Lightning (climb)'s fame is easily verifiable in climbing): probably the most famous boulder in the world, https://www.planetmountain.com/en/news/climbing/jernej-kruder-climbs-childhood-dream-dreamtime-cresciano.html, They are two of the most famous problems in the world of bouldering, with Dreamtime—arguably the first internationally famous boulder problem since Midnight Lightning. Just google +"dreamtime" +"boulder" +"famous", and you will get every major climbing magazine (per WP:NCLIMB). Hope that works. Aszx5000 (talk) 17:27, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- "Considered" and "one of" make this less bold. I think the article supports both assertions, but if the nominator wants to add an additional source to back it up, it wouldn't hurt. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:19, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Aszx5000 and Gonzo fan2007: Comment: Seems like a bold claim. I wonder if we should attribute this claim or bolster it with more robust sources. Or explore a more verifiable hook. Bruxton (talk) 15:14, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 11[edit]
Snow Bowl (1985)
- ... that the Tampa Bay Buccaneers players wore white uniforms during a snowy NFL game, which made them extremely difficult for their quarterback to see?
- Source: USAToday.com
- Reviewed: Dreamtime (climb)
« Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:38, 11 June 2024 (UTC).
Looks great. QPQ done, sourcing good, no copyvios, no image issues. Length is good for both article and hook. New enough. Hook is interesting, but I did tweak the sentence it comes from. Good to go! ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:04, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Na O-mi
- ... that South Korean actress Na O-mi's stage name was inspired by "I Dream of Naomi" by the Israeli duo Hedva and David?
- ALT1: ... that South Korean actress Na O-mi was cast by Shin Seong-il after placing second at a pageant that he judged? Source: http://www.cine21.com/news/view/?mag_id=22004
- Reviewed:
- Comment: The citation for the first hook doesn't actually mention the name "Hedva and David", but it does say "the name Naomi comes from the hit song 'Naomi in a Dream,' sung by an Israeli mixed duet at the time." (Of course, I'm translating this from Korean, so the title won't match up 100%, but 꿈속의 나오미 is what the song was titled in Korea) Also I could cut the "South" in South Korean if it's obvious enough she's not from the North.
Wuju Daisuki (talk) 16:54, 11 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Korean-language sources were checked for close paraphrasing; no issues arose. I strongly prefer the original hook over ALT1. I do not think that the lack of an explicit mention of the Israeli duo's name in the original Korean source is a significant problem. If the promoter does deem it so, however, the hook could be reworded like so:
- "... that South Korean actress Na O-mi's stage name was inspired by the song 'I Dream of Naomi'?"
I also added "the song" and "singing duo" to the original hook for clarity's sake.
- "... that South Korean actress Na O-mi's stage name was inspired by the song "I Dream of Naomi" by Israeli singing duo Hedva and David?"
I hope this nomination succeeds. Yue🌙 21:50, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Yue I think the modified version you listed here (not the one you modified for clarity on the top, I think that one is too wordy) is nice to me. I also re-added the filmography. Wuju Daisuki (talk) 17:00, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
1940 NFL All-Star Game (January)
- ... that all of the players on the Green Bay Packers were selected for the 1940 NFL All-Star Game?
- Source: PFR.com
- Reviewed: Traverse (climbing)
« Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:33, 11 June 2024 (UTC).
As a Lions fan, am I allowed to just reject this outright? (kidding) Article is new enough, long enough, and well sourced. Earwig appears to be down, but a spot check of sources showed no issues. QPQ done. Hook is interesting, but I worry that in going for "hookiness" it might go too far towards being misleading. The Packers were one of the teams in the game, but is that the same as the players being "selected" for the game, as those for the actual all-star team were? What about wording it something closer to
- ALT1: ... that the entire Green Bay Packers team was chosen to play in the 1940 NFL All-Star Game?
- @Gonzo fan2007: What do you think of this? It's still "hooky" while hewing a little closer to fact, in my opinion. But despite my joke earlier, I'm not deliberately trying to be difficult and am open to other suggestions. DrOrinScrivello (talk) 23:27, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- DrOrinScrivello, that actually was going to be my original hook, but then I questioned whether "played" was factually correct. There aren't a lot of great sources for an 84 year old game, and I can't be certain that every player actually "played" (there were at least 2 injuries for Packers players noted before the game). "Select" is kind of the word used by the NFL for being chosen to the Pro Bowl and is consistent with List of Green Bay Packers Pro Bowl selections. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 23:33, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- All that to say I don't really mind either ALT if you think ALT1 is fine. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 23:36, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
I agree that "select" is what you usually expect to see in most Pro Bowl situations, but it seems to me that on this particular occasion the players themselves weren't "selected" per se. Maybe a way to get around the "play" issue would be to say,
- ALT1b: ... that the entire Green Bay Packers team was chosen to compete in the 1940 NFL All-Star Game?
- I think this is mostly hair splitting, though, and would not argue if the promoter choses any of the three options. Assuming my suggestions didn't alter the original enough for this to be considered approving my own hook (in which case I'm fine with another reviewer being requested), I think this is good to go. DrOrinScrivello (talk) 23:53, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
Unpromoted per WT:DYK.— Preceding unsigned comment added by RoySmith (talk • contribs) 14:06, June 18, 2024 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that the Green Bay Packers once defeated a team of all-stars chosen from the rest of the league? DrOrinScrivello, are you satisfied with this hook? « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 13:56, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
I am. I know it's not quite what you wanted, but I think this is still an interesting hook and at least your good work on the article will still get featured. ALT2 is good to go. DrOrinScrivello (talk) 14:20, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 12[edit]
Nederlandsche Kultuurkamer
- ... that, of the three presidents of the Chamber of Dutch Culture, two were arrested and one was assassinated? Source: Goedewaagen arrested: "Dr. T. (Tobie) Goedewaagen" (in Dutch). Parlementair Documentatie Centrum. Archived from the original on 10 January 2023. Retrieved 11 June 2024.; Reydon assassinated: "Mr. H. Reydon Overleden" [Mr. H. Reydon Dies]. Nieuwsblad van het Noorden (in Dutch). Groningen. 25 August 1943. p. 1.; De Ranitz arrested: "Jhr.Mr. S.M.S. de Ranitz" (in Dutch). Parlementair Documentatie Centrum. Archived from the original on 27 January 2022. Retrieved 11 June 2024.
- ALT1: ... that the Nazi regime in the Netherlands established a cultural organization that numbered more than 42,000 members, from prominent artists to organ grinders? Source: 42,000 members: "Kultuurkamer – Kunst en Cultuur in de Tweede Wereldoorlog" [The Kultuurkamer – Art and Culture in the Second World War]. Historiek (in Dutch). 6 October 2022. (also in Lewin, without a date); Prominent artists to organ grinders: Lewin, Lisette (1983). Het Clandestiene Boek 1940–1945 [The Clandestine Books, 1940–1945]. Van Gennep. p. 76. ISBN 9789060125502.
- ALT2: ... that the poet Adriaan Roland Holst wrote that he would greatly appreciate the disapproval of the Chamber of Dutch Culture? Source: "Kultuurkamer – Kunst en Cultuur in de Tweede Wereldoorlog" [The Kultuurkamer – Art and Culture in the Second World War]. Historiek (in Dutch). 6 October 2022.
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 01:44, 12 June 2024 (UTC).
Approving all hooks on good faith. Article is long enough and created day before DYK nomination. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and free from copyvio. All hooks are interesting and sourced, though in Dutch. QPQ done. Good to go, thank you for your nomination Chris Woodrich! Kimikel (talk) 19:36, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
J. D. Arteaga
- ... that J. D. Arteaga, best friend of Alex Rodriguez, did not foresee Rodriguez's talent?
- ALT1: ... that J. D. Arteaga is friends with both a prolific New York Yankee and Boston Red Sock?
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TarheelBornBred (talk) 16:34, 12 June 2024 (UTC).
@TarheelBornBred: Article is long enough and created same day as DYK nomination. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and copy-vio free. No QPQ needed. Hook-wise, I prefer ALT0, although I would edit it for contextual sake, and to better reflect the article's content:
- ALT2: ... that J. D. Arteaga, a close friend of MLB All-Star Alex Rodriguez, did not foresee Rodriguez's talent?
- Please let me know your thoughts. Kimikel (talk) 03:00, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- Your version of the hook sounds fine to me; I'm more than willing to submit the article under your revised hook. TarheelBornBred (talk) 01:53, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Approving ALT2. All good to go, thank you TarheelBornBred! Kimikel (talk) 14:48, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
How to Be Perfect
- ... that in his book How to Be Perfect, Michael Schur sought to "wade into some deeply confusing and painful applications of moral philosophy ... but in a fun way"?
- Source: "...Schur makes good on his promise to 'wade into some deeply confusing and painful applications of moral philosophy, stretching and straining and chewing on really tough questions that plague us in our daily lives, that cause us anxiety and anguish and often lead to loud arguments with our closest friends and family. But in a fun way!'" Kirkus Reviews
- Source: "Down to the musical cues and audio cast (which includes the actors Ted Danson, Kristen Bell, Manny Jacinto, and Jameela Jamil), How to Be Perfect could be considered a companion piece to the author's recent hit, The Good Place." Modak, Sebastian. The New York Times Book Review. March 13, 2022. pg 9.
DrOrinScrivello (talk) 13:47, 14 June 2024 (UTC).
Approving both hooks, with preference to ALT0. Article is long enough and moved to mainspace 2 days before DYK submission. Article is presentable and copyvio-free; if possible, I would recommend adding URLs for the sources that don't have them. Hooks are interesting and sourced well; I think ALT0 is more interesting. QPQ done. Other than that, nothing to comment. Thank you for your submission DrOrinScrivello! Kimikel (talk) 02:33, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Music Sounds Better with You
- ... that the vocalist on the dance song "Music Sounds Better with You" was in a punk band that disapproved of his collaboration with electronic musicians?
- ALT1: ... that Thomas Bangalter declined an offer of over $3 million from Virgin Records to make a Stardust album after the success of their song "Music Sounds Better with You"?
lunaeclipse (talk) 21:33, 14 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Since I am a relatively new user (est Dec2023), I am not sure if ALT0 violates NPOV. But regardless, I prefer ALT1 JuniperChill (talk) 22:08, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
Tobie Goedewaagen
- ... that Tobie Goedewaagen (pictured), a minister under the Nazi occupation government, fled the Netherlands with his belongings in a bedspread?
- Source: "Dr. T. (Tobie) Goedewaagen" (in Dutch). Parlementair Documentatie Centrum. Archived from the original on 10 January 2023. Retrieved 11 June 2024.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 668 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.— Chris Woodrich (talk) 14:19, 12 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: I am assuming in good faith that the Dutch refs adequately support the text and that there is no plagiarism. I've done a general search myself as to the subject of the bio in English sources. There were some deletions made to the article of the word Nazi here; restoring the word would help make this properly neutral in accuracy, and I would be happy then to pass this final item of the qpq. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:FD8F:5C17:CABB:9E61 (talk) 20:25, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
@DYK admins: I started working on this, but my comments so far are not showing up .. am I doing something wrong in format? 2603:7000:2101:AA00:FD8F:5C17:CABB:9E61 (talk) 20:29, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- gotta have the status field filled in :) theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 21:00, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- Hi 2603. I've moved "Nazi" back in front of "German occupation". — Chris Woodrich (talk) 12:16, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. Looks good. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:900D:526B:7A29:78AD (talk) 02:06, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 13[edit]
1899–1900 peasant unrest in Bulgaria
- ... that during the 1899–1900 peasant unrest in Bulgaria, some troops refused orders to fire upon the protesters?
- Source: Bell, John D. (2019). Peasants in Power: Alexander Stamboliski and the Bulgarian Agrarian National Union, 1899-1923. Princeton University Press. ISBN 978-0-691-65544-4, p. 45: "By dawn of the following day, the balance of forces had so shifted that the peasants decided to challenge the troops by marching to Ruse. When they approached the troops the commander gave the order to open fire. The soldiers, however, refused to shoot into the peasants and fired two volleys into the air. The commander himself drew his revolver and fired at the peasants, who rushed at him and made him prisoner. Some of the soldiers allowed their weapons to be taken and the rest retreated."
- Source 2: Hristov, Hristo (1962). Селските вълнения и бунтове 1899–1900 [Peasant Disturbances and Rebellions 1899–1900] (in Bulgarian). Izdatelstvo na Natsionalnia Savet na Otechestvenia Front: "Постигането на първите успехи повдигна духа на селяните и положението на стражарите и войниците стана критично. За да сломи нападателния дух на селяните, командирът на войсковия отред даде заповед за стрелба. Но войниците отказаха да стрелят в своите бащи и братя. Не беше изпълнена също така и заповедта „На нож!“. Войската се колебаеше."
- Translation from Bulgarian: "The achievement of the first successes raised the spirits of the villagers and the situation of the guards and soldiers became critical. To break the offensive spirit of the villagers, the commander of the military detachment gave the order to shoot. But the soldiers refused to shoot their fathers and brothers. The order "On a knife!" was also not carried out. The army hesitated."
Anonimu (talk) 14:11, 20 June 2024 (UTC).
@Anonimu: Article is long enough and new enough. QPQ not needed. Article is well-sourced and copyvio-free. Hook is interesting and well-sourced. The article has an issue with presentability: there are many dead links. I recommend either de-linking them or linking to their Bulgarian Wikipedia equivalents. Once this is resolved, I can approve the nomination. Kimikel (talk) 04:03, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- I added inter-language links for all targets that had substantial content in other wikis and removed one link.Anonimu (talk) 11:15, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
Good to go, thank you for your nomination Anonimu - Kimikel (talk) 14:38, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
- I added inter-language links for all targets that had substantial content in other wikis and removed one link.Anonimu (talk) 11:15, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
Harriette Cooke
- ... that Cornell College professor Harriette Cooke started the Cornell’s Ladies Battalion in 1889, and the women held drills in skirted uniforms while using wooden wands in the place of rifles?
- Source: Rexroat, Dee Ann (February 17, 2021). "Pioneering women: The top moments in women's history at Cornell College". Cornell College News Center. Retrieved June 13, 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/List of historic places in Gore District
- Comment: The DYK check is wrong when it says that the article has not been expanded at least 5x. It was 810 characters of prose prior to expansion, and it is now 4,059 characters of prose. 810 times 5 is 4,050.
SL93 (talk) 09:40, 13 June 2024 (UTC).
- If the hook must be independent of the subject, I have -
- ALT1 ... that Cornell College professor Harriette Cooke was also a deaconess? SL93 (talk) 01:10, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
Approving ALT1. Article is long enough and 5x expanded on the day of DYK submission. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and copyvio-free. QPQ done. Both hooks are interesting and sourced; however, I feel ALT0 is a little verbose and could be worded in a way that flowed better. Other than that, all good to go. Thank you for the nomination SL93! Kimikel (talk) 19:49, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Shirt (song)
- ... that fans on TikTok were behind the name choice for one of SZA's singles?
- Source: American Songwriter: "Surfacing in 2020 on Instagram, the song gained traction on TikTok and became a viral soundbite. It soundtracked a popular dance craze on the platform and fans gave the tune its name."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Album covers of Blue Note Records
- Comment: Open to alternative hook suggestions.
PSA 🏕️🪐 (please make some noise...) 01:26, 20 June 2024 (UTC).
Approving nomination. QPQ done. Article is long enough and passed GA review 7 days before nomination. Article is presentable, well-sourced and copyvio-free. Hook is interesting and well-sourced. Thank you for the submission PSA! Kimikel (talk) 18:38, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Ghost in the Machine (song)
- ... that one critic interpreted a SZA song as being about her fears about the growing influence of AI in the music industry?
- Source: American Songwriter: " For most of the track, SZA smoothly croons about the disheartening taste in the music industry. As she notices the growing influence of artificial intelligence on the pop landscape, evident in the Robot got future, I don't lyric, she looks to her lover to distract her from her worrisome reality."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/WRLH (New Hampshire)
- Comment: Open to hook suggestions.
PSA 🏕️🪐 (please make some noise...) 01:35, 20 June 2024 (UTC).
- @PSA and Dylan620: Please provide a QPQ. Z1720 (talk) 15:57, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Z1720: D'oh! Apologies for the oversight and thank you for catching that – I've added an older review of mine as a QPQ. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 16:31, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
Approving nomination. Article is long enough and passed GA review 7 days prior to DYK nomination. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and copy-vio free. The hook is interesting and sourced well. QPQ is done. Nothing else to comment on from me. Thank you for the submission PSA and Dylan620! Kimikel (talk) 03:48, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Narragansett Pier Railroad
- ... that owners of the Narragansett Pier Railroad included a family of industrialists, a dentist, a systems analyst, a lumberyard, and the founder of Textron? Source: A Short Haul to the Bay: A History of the Narragansett Pier Railroad by James N. J. Henwood. Dentist supported by [10] Bangor Daily News, December 28, 1979, page 2.
Trainsandotherthings (talk) 20:10, 17 June 2024 (UTC).
Approving on good faith. Article is long enough and promoted to GA four days before DYK nom. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and free from copyvio. Hook is interesting, source is acceptable on good faith. Image meets criteria. QPQ done. Nothing else to comment on from me. Thank you for your nomination Trainsandotherthings! Kimikel (talk) 03:34, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- File:Narragansett Pier Railroad 11.jpg is a technically superior image; if we run an image, I strongly suggest we use that instead. On the other hand, while both images are marked CC-BY-SA-4.0 on the https://provlibdigital.org/ site where they came from, I have my doubts as to whether that's legitimate. @Trainsandotherthings and Nikkimaria:. RoySmith (talk) 20:55, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Mindustry
- ... that the real-time strategy, tower defense and factory management game Mindustry (pictured) is freely licensed under the GPLv3?
- Source: From article. For license see license from repo; for rest, see Bolding, Jonathan (December 5, 2020). "The factory-building tower defense of Mindustry gets a huge 6.0 update". PC Gamer. Archived from the original on April 2, 2023. Retrieved June 10, 2023.
jp×g🗯️ 01:26, 16 June 2024 (UTC).
I had to add the '(pictured)' to the hook as required. Other than that its good for DYK. New enough, long enough, no copyvio, QPQ done. JuniperChill (talk) 22:25, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Chicken of Tomorrow Contest
- ... that most broiler chickens around the world descend from the 1948 winners of the Chicken of Tomorrow Contest?
- Source: "rbor Acres White Rocks’ white feathered birds beat the competition in the purebred category, but Red Cornish crosses from the Vantress Hatchery definitely outperformed them. And as it happens, those two breeds would eventually be crossed and become the Arbor Acre breed – whose genetics now dominate poultry farms worldwide."
"Before long, Arbor Acre’s parent stock had supplied all the major broiler companies in America."
Modern FarmerThriley (talk) 02:54, 24 June 2024 (UTC).
- Review underway... Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 15:46, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- Newly created in mainspace on 13 June, the day of nomination, by moving from Draftspace.
- Length is acceptable, at just over 2,000 bytes. Correctly rated Start-class.
- No obvious close paraphrasing or copyvio noted in spot-checks of sources, but I tweaked a couple of phrases which could have been considered too close to the source.
- The image is PD because copyright has expired. If used, the hook would need to have something like (White Rock chicken pictured) appended. It is used in the article, so no issues there.
- Sourcing and referencing is fine: everything is referenced, and to decent-quality sources.
- No issues with neutrality, POV etc.
- The hook fact is sourced and interesting – in fact quite remarkable. Length of the hook is fine.
- QPQ review has been done.
An interesting story. Verified and good to go. Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 19:11, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
Sebastiaan Matheus Sigismund de Ranitz (1901–1987)
- ... that the Dutch Nazi collaborator Sebastiaan de Ranitz was defended at the Special Court of Justice by his nephew?
- Source: "Tegen Jhr. de Ranitz Negen Jaar Geëist" [For Jhr. de Ranitz Nine Years Demanded]. Trouw (in Dutch). Amsterdam. 16 December 1948. p. 3.
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 20:44, 13 June 2024 (UTC).
Verified that the article is long enough, that there are no plagiarism concerns through the Copyvios tool and spotchecking, and that the hook is sourced in the article. Cunard (talk) 07:13, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492 and Cunard: Question: how do we know he was defended by a nephew? The translated source says
The defender, Mr. H. de Ranitz, cousin of the suspect
Bruxton (talk) 18:33, 21 June 2024 (UTC)- @Cunard and Bruxton: Looking into it, neef is one of those lovely words that mean two completely different things (nephew or cousin, even the Dutch Wikipedia page is basically a dab). Without more on his family, "relative" is the best we can do. How about ALT1 ... that the Nazi collaborator Sebastiaan de Ranitz abandoned his office following Mad Tuesday, leaving his department in turmoil?
- That's supported by both Wesselink, Claartje (2014). Kunstenaars van de Kultuurkamer: Geschiedenis en Herinnering [Artists of the Kultuurkamer: History and Memory]. Bert Baker. and the PDC. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 10:52, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
Verified that the hook is sourced in the article and is interesting. The article notes: "Claims that Breda had been liberated were broadcast on 5 September, leading many Nazis to flee the Netherlands for Germany. De Ranitz left the Hague for the Kultuurkamer's regional office in Groningen, and though work continued, his absence caused the institution and its parent department great difficulty."
"were broadcast" links to Dolle Dinsdag, which is Mad Tuesday. Cunard (talk) 08:49, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
- I cannot find the hook in the article. Bruxton (talk) 20:40, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- It was in the sentence Cunard quoted. I have explicitly used the phrase "Mad Tuesday" after 5 September. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 14:45, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- I cannot find the hook in the article. Bruxton (talk) 20:40, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492 and Cunard: Question: how do we know he was defended by a nephew? The translated source says
Beijing Watermelon
- ... that plans to shoot the Beijing-set portions of the 1989 Japanese film Beijing Watermelon were cancelled after the Tiananmen Square protests and massacre occurred mid-production?
- Source: 1
Morgan695 (talk) 18:23, 13 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Nominator still needs to complete QPQ, but otherwise it looks good. It might be good to add in the Production and release section that it had a theatrical re-release in 2024, distributed by Kani Releasing. AdJHu 胡 00:02, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
- @AdJHu: QPQ has been completed. Morgan695 (talk) 17:17, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
QPQ has been completed, so I'd say this is good to go. AdJHu 胡 17:53, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
Pigeon statues in Wellington
- ... that after a pigeon sculpture in Wellington went missing, members of the public created a shrine for it?
- ALT: ... that after a pigeon sculpture in Wellington went missing, people of the city created a memorial for it?
- ALT2: ... that people in Wellington mourned for a missing pigeon sculpture in Reddit by creating a memorial for it?
―Panamitsu (talk) 08:36, 13 June 2024 (UTC).
- This is indeed a very interesting article and the hook is also interesting. The source is notable and I don't see any issue in the article. The main issue is the hook itself. The hook is telling us that people built a shrine after the statue was stolen. But what the source given for it says is slightly different. The news article says "On Reddit, Wellingtonians mourned Cub St’s missing bird by laying flowers and candles at its former perch". It is not even a shrine. The reporter didn’t call it a shrine, the reddit post calls it a shrine and we shouldn’t take the reddit as the reliable source. So @Panamitsu: you need to edit the hook a little bit. Or you can propose alternative hook. Or search for sources directly mentioned it as a shrine. Then ping me and I continue my review. Mehedi Abedin (talk) 13:20, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Mehedi Abedin: The source shows a Reddit post saying "Someone's set up a shrine for the missing pigeon". I've also looked up shrine in the Oxford dictionary, which says "a place associated with or containing memorabilia of a particular revered person or thing", so I personally think that it is fine to call it a shrine even if the source doesn't (directly) say it. What do you think? ―Panamitsu (talk) 01:43, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Panamitsu: Well I guess we don't have to be so perfect. Although I think that using the word "memorial" would be better. By the way, I am gonna pass this hook anyway. Mehedi Abedin (talk) 03:05, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Mehedi Abedin: The source shows a Reddit post saying "Someone's set up a shrine for the missing pigeon". I've also looked up shrine in the Oxford dictionary, which says "a place associated with or containing memorabilia of a particular revered person or thing", so I personally think that it is fine to call it a shrine even if the source doesn't (directly) say it. What do you think? ―Panamitsu (talk) 01:43, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: The hook is good to go. However if the promoter has any issue with the word "shrine" then they can replace it with "memorial". I am going to add ALT hooks here in case any other issue occurs. Mehedi Abedin (talk) 03:09, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
Luna (Feid and ATL Jacob song)
- ... that the Colombian singer Feid collaborated for the second time with an American hip hop producer in "Luna", and it was called "an effort to take the genre to the global level"?
- Source: "Feid le regaló al público un nuevo EP por fin de año: «FERXXOCALIPSIS»". Billboard Argentina (in Spanish). 2023-12-01. Retrieved 2024-06-13.
Santi (talk) 04:48, 13 June 2024 (UTC).
Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 16:26, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Nom is three days after GA promotion, passed a GA review, all good. ミラP@Miraclepine 16:33, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Miraclepine: Would it be appropiate if we change the ALT due to the performance at the 2024 Copa América? Santi (talk) 04:36, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Pollosito: Actually, you're supposed to add an ALT1 separate from the original ALT0. Once you do that, I'll decide whether to approve and which one is preferred. ミラP@Miraclepine 19:37, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Miraclepine: That's what I meant, only for me adding another alt and having it approved is equivalent to changing it in some way. I'm sorry for making you think I was literally going to change what's above. Well, here it goes:
ALT1: ... that the Colombian singer Feid performed "Luna" as the only song at the 2024 Copa América opening ceremony, but there were several technical issues in the transmission? Santi (talk) 20:24, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Pollosito: I've checked the sourcing in the new additions, and they're in accordance with DYK guidelines. Hence, I
Approve ALT1, which I prefer more. ミラP@Miraclepine 20:56, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Miraclepine: Then the hook is ready now. Thanks for picking this! Santi (talk) 21:20, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Pollosito: I've checked the sourcing in the new additions, and they're in accordance with DYK guidelines. Hence, I
- @Miraclepine: That's what I meant, only for me adding another alt and having it approved is equivalent to changing it in some way. I'm sorry for making you think I was literally going to change what's above. Well, here it goes:
18th Lok Sabha
- ... that post enforcement of Women's Reservation Bill in India in the next few years, 33% of women MPs will be required although new Lok Sabha has only 14%?
§§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 03:42, 13 June 2024 (UTC). General eligibility:
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Overall: Approved only for ALT hook proposed by me. Mehedi Abedin (talk) 11:43, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 14[edit]
Parengyodontium album
- ... that Parengyodontium album is only one of four known species of marine fungi that is capable of degrading plastics? Source: https://www.nioz.nl/en/news/fungus-breaks-down-ocean-plastic
- ALT1: ... that the marine fungal species Parengyodontium album only breaks down polyethylene plastics that has been exposed to UV light?
- Reviewed:
- Comment: Recently created. I think the refs and the content needs a quick double check for verifiability and copyvio. However, I think it should be ok.
Classicwiki (talk) If you reply here, please ping me. 03:32, 16 June 2024 (UTC).
Approving both hooks. Article is long enough and created 2 days before DYK nomination. Article is presentable, sourced, and copyvio-free. Both hooks are interesting and well-sourced. QPQ not needed. Good to go overall. Thank you Classicwiki and Chiffre01. Kimikel (talk) 19:03, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Benjamin Jackson (sailor)
- ... that Benjamin Jackson was likely paid at least $300 to fight in the American Civil War as Lewis Saunders?
- Source: Pages 197 and 198 of this book detail how Benjamin Jackson enlisted in the Union Navy in May 1864 as a substitute for a US citizen named Lewis Saunders, who was drafted, but had the opportunity to pay for a substitute to take his place. The fee Jackson received was likely at least $300. Because Jackson served as a substitute, he was enlisted under the Saunders name.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Space Babies
- Comment: Thank you in advance for reviewing my nomination!
Dugan Murphy (talk) 22:35, 14 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Can't find any mention of 300 dollars in the book, accepted in good faith. TheNuggeteer (talk) 07:28, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Brunel University lecture centre
- ... that Brunel University's lecture centre (pictured) was planned to be part of one of the biggest engineering teaching complexes in Europe?
- ALT1: ... that Brunel University's lecture centre (pictured) has been described as "imposing" and "frightening", but also as "an expressive centrepiece" and "a brutalist classic"? Source: "imposing", "frightening" and "a brutalist classic", "an expressive centrepiece"
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Dagmar Skálová
- Comment: I personally prefer ALT1.
Suntooooth, it/he (talk/contribs) 22:19, 14 June 2024 (UTC).
- Review underway... Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 16:02, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- Created (moved from draftspace) on 14th June.
- Long enough, and graded at B-class.
- Decent sources: NHLE listing particulars (extensive), a journal article with more than a passing mention, book about the university (I have checked this via WebArchive) and a couple of newspaper pieces. No issues around notability.
- QPQ review has been done and is awaiting action from the article's nominator. (Edit to say that this is one of the DYK nominations affected by the blocking of the article nominator Evrik as detailed here, which I hadn't realised until checking WT:DYK today. Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 12:30, 18 June 2024 (UTC))
- Re. The lecture centre was finished in 1966 or 1967: surprising that Historic England has not been able to pin down the completion date, but I have checked the listing particulars and other sources and it is indeed the case.
- Image is suitably licensed, was taken by the article author, is used in the article and looks fine at thumbnail size.
- All statements are sourced. No issues with neutrality.
- No copyvio or close paraphrasing noted. There are a couple of phrases which cannot really be reworded without losing their meaning.
- Hooks: both are fully verified. ALT1 is better; I wonder if it might be worth including a reference to the building's use in A Clockwork Orange to grab attention. Something like: ...that Brunel University's "imposing" and "frightening" lecture centre (pictured) featured in A Clockwork Orange? (another editor would need to sign off that hook).
Happy to mark this as verified. Note to prep builders: see my comment above on a possible ALT2 hook which I have suggested. Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 21:09, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 15[edit]
Joan (Alexander McQueen collection)
- ... that the flaming finale of Joan by Alexander McQueen has been read as an image of violence, transcendence, resurrection, and resilience?
- Source:
- Bethune, Kate. "Encyclopedia of Collections". In Wilcox (2015), pp. 303–326. (Violence)
- Spooner, Catherine. "A Gothic Mind". In Wilcox (2015), pp. 141–158. (Transcendence/Resurrection)
- Fairer, Robert; Wilcox, Claire (2016). Alexander McQueen: Unseen. (Violence/Resurrection)
- Wilson, Andrew (2015). Alexander McQueen: Blood Beneath the Skin. (Resilience)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Homeworld: Vast Reaches
- Comment:
♠PMC♠ (talk) 23:51, 15 June 2024 (UTC).
The article is long enough, new enough, and neutral. The hook is directly cited. I assume good faith on the references that I cannot read. A QPQ has been completed. Ready. SL93 (talk) 00:26, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. I can send screencaps of anything if anyone does want to check the sources (GBooks has Unseen and Blood Beneath, I think). I just tweaked firery -> flaming as I think it flows more nicely. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 00:53, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
Gmac Cash
- ... that rapper Gmac Cash attempted to gift a pair of Cartier glasses to Michigan Governor Gretchen Whitmer, but she declined?
- ALT1: ... that rapper Gmac Cash coined the nickname "Big Gretch" in a song for Michigan Governor Gretchen Whitmer? Source: ‘Big Gretch’ discusses nickname, potential run for White House. October 24, 2023, WNEM-TV.
- Reviewed:
reppoptalk 08:02, 18 June 2024 (UTC).
Checked the references used for the first hook. It looks good and it's a funny story. Ready to go unless someone wants to come over and overrule me. Ominae (talk) 13:13, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
Timeline of Partygate
- ... that after he attended a birthday party on 19 June 2020 (pictured), Boris Johnson became the first serving Prime Minister of the United Kingdom to be found to have broken the law?
- Source: "Mr Johnson is the first serving PM to be sanctioned for breaking the law." BBC News
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Zhang Zhenglang
- Comment: The best time to run this would probably be 19 June, but I recognise that I may have missed the boat on that date.
A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 20:44, 15 June 2024 (UTC).
- Comment not review As this is an article featuring election candidates, it should not appear on the main page until after 4 July, see WP:DYKELECT. TSventon (talk) 21:19, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
New enough and long enough. QPQ present. This is a unique contribution to DYK as it is three paragraphs and a list; even though one paragraph does not end in an inline citation, I am treating it as a lead-section paragraph. All the list bullet points contain at least one inline citation. The hook fact checks out and is included. Image is OGL-licensed and acceptable for the Main Page. Good to go after 4 July per above. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:49, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for the review, Sammi! If you've got concerns over the amount of prose in this article, I've expanded the lead with another paragraph. Let me know if you think this has improved things. Thanks, A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 15:32, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Gloria Dickie
- ... that environmental journalist Gloria Dickie did her thesis on how cities in Colorado changed garbage laws to prevent bear incursions?
- Source: "The Bear In Your Back Yard" - The New Yorker
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Dick Walker (astronomer)
- Comment: The article was moved from draftspace to mainspace with this edit.
SilverserenC 20:18, 15 June 2024 (UTC).
Newly moved article long enough and on notable topic. Subject passes GNG. No apparant copyvios. QPQ done. Hook is interesting and ready to go. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 12:23, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 16[edit]
YMCA Building (San Diego)
- ... that the San Diego YMCA served over 125 million military personnel?
- Source: KFMB-TV and the The Daily Telegraph. Full citations in article.
- Reviewed:
- Comment: This is my first DYK nomination; any pointers on how to do better are always welcome!
RevelationDirect (talk) 21:50, 22 June 2024 (UTC).
- @RevelationDirect: I will review this in a couple hours (currently busy with other things in real life), if no one else does (but I will need to request someone else to "check my work" because I am a new DYK reviewer. GoldRomean (talk) 15:42, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- Note: 125 million (hook) or 125 (article)? Needs to be fixed, I think. GoldRomean (talk) 15:44, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
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- Sources are for this building specifically, maybe change to something like "... that the San Diego YMCA building served over 125 military personnel?" (add "building")?
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Overall: I'm a new DYk reviewer, so requesting fresh review. GoldRomean (talk) 19:54, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- Article created on June 16th and nominated on 22nd, so new enough. GoldRomean (talk) 19:56, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- Hook cited but incorrectly mentioned in article (says 125 instead of 125 million) (I've done some copyediting and fixed this). GoldRomean (talk) 19:56, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
@RevelationDirect: Review complete (requesting second review, though). GoldRomean (talk) 20:00, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
You can get a handy template right here.
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Impressive 0.0% on Earwig's copyvio detector. QPQ not needed. However, I just want to be sure. It stretches belief a bit to say the YMCA served the equivalent of the entire population of Japan or Mexico, but I'll chalk it up to it having been operating for a long time. Bremps... 06:25, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
The Servile State
- ... that in The Servile State, Hilaire Belloc (pictured) criticized socialism for being too similar to capitalism?
- Source: "The [socialist] experiment is thoroughly suited [...] to the Capitalist society which it proposes to replace. It works with the existing machinery of Capitalism, talks and thinks in the existing terms of Capitalism, appeals to just those appetites which Capitalism has aroused, and ridicules as fantastic and unheard-of just those things in society the memory of which Capitalism has killed among men wherever the blight of it has spread." p. 78 NB that Belloc earlier defines socialism and collectivism as the same thing (p. 7) which is why the source calls it collectivism.
- ALT1: ... that in The Servile State, Hilaire Belloc (pictured) traced the history of capitalism to the Protestant Reformation instead of the Industrial Revolution? Source: For the Reformation claim, see page 25; for the Industrial Revolution being incorrect see pp. 41–42
- ALT2: ... that although it was written in 1912, George Orwell once described The Servile State as "foretell[ing] with remarkable insight" events that occurred from the 1930s onward? Source: "The Servile State is written in a tiresome style, and the remedy it suggests (a return to small-scale peasant ownership) is for many reasons impossible: still, it does foretell with remarkable insight the kind of things that have been happening from about 1930 onwards."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Oen Boen Ing
- Comment: Open to other hooks; this page has plenty of DYK opportunities.
ThaesOfereode (talk) 23:16, 16 June 2024 (UTC).
Approving ALT0 and ALT1. Article is long enough and expanded same day as DYK nomination. Article is well-sourced, copyvio-free, and presentable. Hooks are all interesting and sourced; I prefer the first two ALTs because ALT 2 requires prior knowledge of who George Orwell was, and because it just isn't as aesthetically pleasing due to the brackets. QPQ done. Image meets criteria. Overall, great nomination, thank you ThaesOfereode. Kimikel (talk) 20:16, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
A Stroke of the Pen: The Lost Stories
- ... that early in his career Terry Pratchett had published short stories in newspapers, which remained unknown until they were posthumously discovered and republished in the 2023 book A Stroke of the Pen?
- Source: "A Stroke of the Pen: The Lost Stories – Like any collection of juvenilia, for committed fans only, but there's plenty here for them to enjoy". Kirkus Reviews. 2023. Archived from the original on 2023-10-12.
- ALT1: ... that Terry Pratchett's earliest Discworld stories were discovered by two fans and republished in 2023 in the posthumous book A Stroke of the Pen: The Lost Stories? Source: "A Stroke of the Pen: The Lost Stories". Publishers Weekly. 2023. Archived from the original on 2024-06-08.
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Al83tito (talk) 04:34, 19 June 2024 (UTC).
Article - Created 16 June, nominated 19 June: 4688 words: sources reliable, including source of hook: article is presentable. Hook - meets criteria of verifiability, interest and format. Good to go.Smerus (talk) 13:11, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
Zhou Wennan
- ... that in order to re-marry, Zhou Wennan had to request Mao Zedong for permission?
- Source: 1942年,弟媳周文楠要求再婚,毛主席:我没意见,但是有一个条件
- ALT1: ... that for 38 years, Zhou Wennan never knew the fate of her son who served as a soldier in the Chinese communist-led Eighth Route Army? Source: 毛泽东侄子被谁秘密处决?30年后才真相大白
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Voyager 2
Toadboy123 (talk) 16:01, 16 June 2024 (UTC).
New, long, & neutral enuf; interesting. AGF on refs, which are all in Chinese, & so both hooks. Earwig finds nothing. GTG. Johnbod (talk) 13:37, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
Banana (2024 video game)
- ... that a video game consisting solely of a clickable image of a banana became the second most played game on Steam?
Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 18:11, 16 June 2024 (UTC).
@Generalissima: Article looks good, QPQ is done, etc. When I first saw the hook I wasn't sure if "second most played" referred to a concurrent count, or of a number of purchases in the past month or all time. I think it might be better to add something to the effect of "concurrent". You passed me in DYKs :(. ―Panamitsu (talk) 03:17, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- Oh yeah, maybe "reached the second highest concurrent player count on Steam?" Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:20, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
Yup that looks good to me. ―Panamitsu (talk) 03:22, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- Oh yeah, maybe "reached the second highest concurrent player count on Steam?" Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:20, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- Comment I do have some major doubts about this "game"'s notability. Mainly, I think it fails WP:SUSTAINED, as it appears to be a flash-in-the-pan phenomenon that quickly drops off the radar and there is nothing to really talk about with regards to its content. I am not sure if DYK articles are required to pass notability criteria (the guidelines simply say "reliably sourced") but it risks coming off as advertising if a non-notable gimmick reaches the main page. ᴢxᴄᴠʙɴᴍ (ᴛ) 05:38, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Zxcvbnm: I feel the article pretty plainly meets GNG. It's covered in-depth in a wide variety of reliable sources for a month now, including Forbes. Even "gimmicks" are notable if they get significant, reliable coverage. (And no, notability is not a DYK thing. If it gets AFD'ed thats another issue.) Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 05:49, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- The only sources in the article are from a 2-week timespan from the beginning of June to a few days ago. That, to me and likely most other editors is not a sustained span of time in which the "game" is discussed. That goes into the realm of Wikipedia as news website rather than as a lagging indicator of notability. "Brief bursts of news coverage" do not demonstrate notability. There's a possibility that several months from now, the "game" will still be major, but we are not a crystal ball. ᴢxᴄᴠʙɴᴍ (ᴛ) 05:59, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Zxcvbnm: But lots of games have articles relatively soon after release. How can we say *any* game will or won't have coverage? Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 06:22, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- Usually games have some degree of pre-release announcements and whatnot even before it comes out, with release day only cementing its notability. I'd say literally any game article that is created shortly after a game is announced is frowned upon for being WP:TOOSOON. I'm not saying it should be deleted now, but it does risk being deleted at a later date if its popularity fails to last. ᴢxᴄᴠʙɴᴍ (ᴛ) 06:32, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Zxcvbnm: I feel the article pretty plainly meets GNG. It's covered in-depth in a wide variety of reliable sources for a month now, including Forbes. Even "gimmicks" are notable if they get significant, reliable coverage. (And no, notability is not a DYK thing. If it gets AFD'ed thats another issue.) Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 05:49, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
Oen Boen Ing
- ... that Dr. Oen Boen Ing used his own money to pay for some patients' prescriptions?
- Source: Lie, Ravando (2017). "Dr Oen Boen Ing: Patriot Doctor, Social Activist, and Doctor of the Poor" (PDF). Wacana. 18 (2): 478. doi:10.17510/wacana.v18i2.592. – "Whenever Dr Oen knew a patient could not afford to pay for medicine, he would sign and stamp the prescription. [...] A prescription bearing Dr Oen’s signature meant that the doctor himself would pay for it out of his own pocket."
- ALT1: ... that Dr. Oen Boen Ing, who often worked for free, was so popular that the Indonesian government was petitioned to not evacuate him during a period of violence against Chinese Indonesians? Source: Lie, Ravando (2017). "Dr Oen Boen Ing: Patriot Doctor, Social Activist, and Doctor of the Poor" (PDF). Wacana. 18 (2): 467. doi:10.17510/wacana.v18i2.592. – "The report also said that Dr Oen was able to assist more than 200 patients a day and more than half of them did not have to pay a single penny. ... When a series of anti-Tionghoa upheaval erupted in Surakarta, Dr Oen was supposed to be evacuated to a safe place by the Republican government. However, after hearing such a plan, people in Surakarta submitted a petition rejecting the idea and hoping Dr Oen would remain in Surakarta to assist the poor."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Grace A. Johnson
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 01:04, 16 June 2024 (UTC).
- Excellent article. Neat guy.
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Overall: Earwig marked ~40% for the Wacana PDF, but a spot check indicates that it's probably due to the foreign language element and particular phrasing like "fun fairs"; I didn't see any serious issues. Promoter, feel free to double-check my work; this is my first QPQ review. ThaesOfereode (talk) 21:16, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. I reviewed Earwig, and changed "decided to move" to "moved", but most of these are proper names or direct quotations. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 22:44, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 17[edit]
Frances Darlington
- ... that although sculptor Frances Darlington was known for her painted relief panels, she also designed a railway poster?
- Source: "(An Ilkley Borough Council committee was formed) ... to bring before the public the advantage of Ilkley, and in answer to an advertisement for designs in posters to be placed at various stations on the different railways, some thirty or more competed for same in colour. (After consideration) they awarded the first prize to Miss Frances Darlington, of Ilkley" - plus loads of sources in the article for her being a sculptor.
- Reviewed: Max Weil
- Comment: Created over some months in userspace, then moved to mainspace 17 June 2024
Storye book (talk) 10:03, 19 June 2024 (UTC).
New article, well written and high quality (likely suitable for a GA nomination). No copyvio issues found. Hook is interesting, cited in the article, and of appropriate length. My one concern is the licensing of the image. Without the photographer's identity and thus death date, and without proof that it was first published prior to 1929, the claimed license is not valid. PD-old-assumed would be valid given that the image is >120 years old, but an appropriate US copyright tag would still be needed. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 06:10, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- I have done some further research and updated the licence. Storye book (talk) 09:13, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Storye book: Good work figuring out the photographer! Unfortunately, US copyright is tricky - proof of pre-1929 publication (or other scenarios) is still needed for it to be public domain in the US. I'm sorry to be pushy about this, but I've seen other hooks get pulled last-minute for similar issues and I don't want that to happen to you. If you're not able to find original publication information, then the hook would be fine without the image, or with one of her artworks (maybe File:Frieze by Darlington (9b) History the Sublime Hymn and Astronomy.jpg). Pi.1415926535 (talk) 22:11, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Fireze by Darlington (detail) - Thank you for your comment. Here is the image that you requested as a second option.
- Note: I always do my best to cooperate on DYK templates, whether as reviewer, creator or nominator. However I also claim the right to an opinion. In this case, you will see that I am doing my best to cooperate. However, in the (nearly) 20 years that I have been a WP contributor, I have never seen a 120-year-old UK photo refused at DYK on those grounds. This image was a carte de visite, as were most photographs in the UK in 1897. They were purchased in batches and used as visiting cards, and were left at the addresses of acquaintances and businesses in the way that we leave our contact details today. Unlike our contact details today, cartes de visite were expected to be shared around by those who received them, because privacy was not an issue in the way that it is today, and cartes de visite were used as a form of advertisement. If that is not a form of publication, I don't know what is. Storye book (talk) 09:03, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
@Storye book: If it's a carte de visite, then I would consider it to have been published. I do think the fireze might be more interesting as a DYK image, since there are a lot of portraits there, but either image is just fine. Great work! Pi.1415926535 (talk) 21:56, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- I have done some further research and updated the licence. Storye book (talk) 09:13, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
1969 Progressive Conservative Party of New Brunswick leadership election
- ... that the 1969 leadership election for the Progressive Conservative Party of New Brunswick was blacklisted by the American Federation of Musicians because one of the candidates was indebted to them?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Jacob Green Jackson
- Comment: Hook could be much better, but the article title is just excessively long. I'm open to rewording it upon suggestion.
B3251(talk) 13:58, 17 June 2024 (UTC).
Approving hook. Article is long enough and created the same day as DYK nomination. Article is well-sourced, copyvio-free, and presentable. Hook is interesting and well-sourced, not sure if there's a better way to word it. QPQ done. Nothing else to comment on from me. Thank you for your nomination B3251! Kimikel (talk) 04:27, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Radcliffe Telescope
- ... that the Radcliffe Telescope was the largest telescope in the Southern Hemisphere when it was completed in 1948?
http://www.royalobservatorygreenwich.org/articles.php?article=915
https://adsabs.harvard.edu/full/1951ASPL....6..170K- Reviewed:
C F A 💬 01:21, 17 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: The article is new, the article is properly sourced, the article is neutral and plagiarism free, the hook is properly cited, the hook is interesting, and you don't require a QPQ, good to go! TheNuggeteer (talk) 11:14, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Joseph Tetley
- ... that Joseph Tetley, a member of the New Zealand Legislative Council, defrauded several investors to the 2017 value of NZ$7 million?
- Source: The Prow, a website run by several New Zealand libraries, says: "Adjusted to 2017 rates, Tetley ran off with under $7,000,000 NZD." And the same source mentions the appointment to the Legislative Council.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ōsakishimojima
- Comment: Right, so this has just been on the main page as a minor link and got attention by 12 editors during the 24 hours on DYK (which is quite a bit for a New Zealand topic). The major expansion during that period was by HotMess. I've done some more expansion since and it's gone from 753 bytes of readable prose (prior to 17 June when expansion started) to 4753 bytes; more than the required 5x expansion.
And whilst we do have a mugshot for the subject, it's of poor quality and thus not worth including in this nomination.
Schwede66 06:39, 22 June 2024 (UTC).
- Reviewing now. Aszx5000 (talk) 14:18, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good to go. Aszx5000 (talk) 14:29, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- 👀👀👀 (this is mildly exciting) 🔥HOTm̵̟͆e̷̜̓s̵̼̊s̸̜̃🔥 (talk・edits) 02:48, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
Band of Angels (novel)
- ... that literary critic Leslie Fiedler called the novel Band of Angels "operatic in the worst sense of the word"?
- Source: Fiedler, Leslie A. (1955-09-26). "Romance in the Operatic Manner." The New Republic, vol. 26. pp. 28-30.
- ALT1: ... that Pulitzer Prize winner Robert Penn Warren wrote a novel called Band of Angels about a woman who is enslaved in order to pay her father's debts? Source: "Band of Angels" Review (1955-08-01). Bulletin from Virginia Kirkus' Service. New York: Kirkus Media, LLC.
- ALT2: ... that Robert Penn Warren's novel Band of Angels was adapted into a film starring Clark Gable and Sidney Poitier? Source: Band of Angels. Turner Classic Movies. Accessed 2024-06-16.
- Reviewed:
MattMauler (talk) 03:37, 17 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Looks good, thanks for expanding the article! I'm partial to the initial hook, but either of the ALTs will work too. ThaesOfereode (talk) 23:12, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Kho Ping Hoo
- ... that Kho Ping Hoo, despite writing numerous stories based on wuxia, could not read Chinese?
- Source: Sawega, Ardus M. (22 July 1994). "Asmaraman Kho Ping Hoo: "Saya Telah Iklas Pergi ..."" [Asmaraman Kho Ping Hoo: "I've Accepted My Departure ..."]. Kompas (in Indonesian). Jakarta. p. 20.
- ALT1: ... that Kho Ping Hoo disliked the film adaptations of his works, feeling that they were almost pornographic? Source: Sidharta, Myra (1994). "Asmaraman Sukowati Kho Ping Hoo (b. 1926): Writer of Cloak-and-dagger Stories in Indonesia". Archipel. 48: 163. doi:10.3406/arch.1994.3007.
- ALT2: ... that Kho Ping Hoo, a writer of martial arts stories, would work on up to four manuscripts simultaneously? Source: Sidharta, Myra (1994). "Asmaraman Sukowati Kho Ping Hoo (b. 1926): Writer of Cloak-and-dagger Stories in Indonesia". Archipel. 48: 160. doi:10.3406/arch.1994.3007.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Hock burns
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 19:08, 17 June 2024 (UTC).
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Leaning more towards original and ALT2; I'll leave the choice up to another reviewer. Great work here! --Slgrandson (How's my egg-throwing coleslaw?) 18:52, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 18[edit]
Helianthus devernii
- ... that the newly discovered and critically imperiled Red Rock sunflower (Helianthus devernii) can only be found around two desert springs located in Red Rock Canyon National Conservation Area? Source: NatureServe, USGS
- ALT1: ... that the newly discovered and critically imperiled Red Rock sunflower (Helianthus devernii) can only be found in an area less than an acre at Red Rock Canyon National Conservation Area? Source: BioOne
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- Comment: Article created by Mezbalogh; article updated by Alalch E. and MtBotany.
Classicwiki (talk) If you reply here, please ping me. 04:05, 23 June 2024 (UTC).
Hi Classicwiki, I've had a quick look at this one. I've made a couple of changes to improve grammar but there are two sections that need citations for the article to be eligible for DYK. Let me know if you can fix these and I will come back to complete the review. Thanks - Dumelow (talk) 09:21, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Dumelow, some of the information had to be stripped, but tried to address the CN tags the best I could. Let me know what you think. --Classicwiki (talk) If you reply to me here, please ping me. 04:19, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Mezbalogh, @Alalch E., @MtBotany, do you know the source of the new count in 2022 which found approximately 900 individuals? I cannot find the survey. Right now I only find sources for the ~400 count. --Classicwiki (talk) If you reply to me here, please ping me. 18:47, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Classicwiki Mezbalogh was the editor who added that information. It was unclear where they got it from. I left it in while looking for a good source, but was not able to find the 900. I did find a presentation from Nevada Division of Natural Heritage saying 725. I've updated the article to reflect this. That work okay? 🌿MtBotany (talk) 20:13, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. Mezbalogh is the creator of this article and an entirely new editor unfamiliar with Wikipedia policy who had added some of their (explicitly) original research to the original version and first few revisions. So they probably got it from their individual, original, research.—Alalch E. 23:13, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Classicwiki Mezbalogh was the editor who added that information. It was unclear where they got it from. I left it in while looking for a good source, but was not able to find the 900. I did find a presentation from Nevada Division of Natural Heritage saying 725. I've updated the article to reflect this. That work okay? 🌿MtBotany (talk) 20:13, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
Thanks all, changes made look good. Classicwiki, I will complete the DYK review: Article created 18 June and is of good length; sources used look to be reliable for the content cited; I don't have access to all the sources but didn't find any issue with overly close paraphrasing in a spotcheck; hooks are interesting and stated in the article (I amended ALT0 to "around two desert springs" as there is a third cluster nearby), AGF on sourcing to journal I don't have access to; image is good and properly licensed; a QPQ is not required in this case. Should be good to go. I just had one remaining query on a part of the text that discusses recreational use of the area and links this to invasive weeds, which I couldn't find in the source. Once this is sorted it will be good to go - Dumelow (talk) 08:19, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Dumelow, I added some citations that these noxious weeds are a problem in Spring Mountains and Clark County area, where the plant is located. Tweaked the sentence. Let me know if there is anything else I need to address. Thx, --Classicwiki (talk) If you reply to me here, please ping me. 05:45, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Hi Classicwiki, I've given it a tick. I removed a bit about recreation that I couldn't find in the source, feel free to re-add if you can support it - Dumelow (talk) 07:33, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
The Griffins' Nest
- ... that the Vancouver School Board's alleged attempt to silence a nest of griffins led to the drafting of a press freedom act?
- Source: Xu, Xiao (May 17, 2022). "B.C. high-school journalists advocate for student press-freedom bill that is a first in Canada". The Globe and Mail. Retrieved May 10, 2024.
- ALT1: ... that the Vancouver School Board's alleged attempt to censor a student newspaper led to the drafting of a press freedom act? Source: Same as the original hook.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Soumane Touré
- Comment: ALT1 is a more "serious" alternative to the original hook, which is a play on the article's title.
Yue🌙 03:54, 18 June 2024 (UTC).
Approving ALT1. Article is long enough and created same day as DYK nomination. Article is well-sourced, copyvio-free (excluding some long organization names), and presentable. Hooks are interesting and sourced (required archived link). I lean towards ALT1, ALT0 is a little too fanciful in my opinion. QPQ done. Nothing else from me. Thank you for your nomination Yue! Kimikel (talk) 20:35, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Fu Wuji
- ... that Fu Wuji's Fuhou gujin zhu includes information on everything from astrological signs to the dimensions of imperial tombs?
- Source: B.J. Mansvelt Beck, "The Treatises of Later Han" pp.129-130
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Kzyx (talk) 21:11, 23 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: The article is okay, and the hook is interesting, the source is a book source but accepted. TheNuggeteer (talk) 11:21, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
WUEC
- ... that the radio station at the University of Wisconsin–Eau Claire would close in the middle of the day so students could attend tasks and carry out production work? Source: https://www-newspapers-com.wikipedialibrary.idm.oclc.org/article/leader-telegram-campus-radio-climbs-up-t/149403265/
Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:45, 18 June 2024 (UTC).
- I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:48, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:24, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 19[edit]
Judy Kellogg Markowsky
- ... that American ornithologist Judy Kellogg Markowsky died afer disappearing in the river that she worked to protect during her life?
- Source: "Bangor-area naturalist receives lifetime environmental award". Bangor Daily News. October 13, 2011. Retrieved June 19, 2024. and Ricker, Nok-Noi (August 5, 2011). "Body of well-known Hampden naturalist found in river". Bangor Daily News. Retrieved June 19, 2024.
SL93 (talk) 23:34, 19 June 2024 (UTC).
- I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:11, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:20, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
L'Aube rouge (novel)
- ... that a novel about Madagascar's colonization could not be published until decades after its author's suicide?
- Source: Adejunmobi, Moradewun (January 1994). "History and Ideology in Jean-Joseph Rabearivelo's Prose Works". Canadian Journal of African Studies / Revue canadienne des études africaines. 28 (2): 219–235. doi:10.1080/00083968.1994.10804351. ISSN 0008-3968.
- ALT1: ... that Jean-Joseph Rabearivelo spared the manuscript of his first novel from destruction before his suicide? Source: Adejunmobi, Moradewun (January 1994). "History and Ideology in Jean-Joseph Rabearivelo's Prose Works". Canadian Journal of African Studies / Revue canadienne des études africaines. 28 (2): 219–235. doi:10.1080/00083968.1994.10804351. ISSN 0008-3968.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Sea Life Brighton
꧁Zanahary꧂ 03:48, 19 June 2024 (UTC).
Honestly, WP (along with Wikisource) needs more Malagasy-related topics over time. See you on the front page! --Slgrandson (How's my egg-throwing coleslaw?) 08:47, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks Slgrandson! Is there an ALT you think is better? If not, no worries, as someone else down the line can decide. I think I prefer ALT0. ꧁Zanahary꧂ 15:55, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 20[edit]
Giado concentration camp
![The Giado concentration camp in Libya's Nafusa Mountains](http://upload.luquay.com/wikipedia/commons/thumb/f/f1/Giado_concentration_camp.jpg/177px-Giado_concentration_camp.jpg)
- ... that Libyan Jews and Arabs traded and bartered with each other at the fence of the Giado concentration camp (pictured)? Source: Hoppe, Jens (2018). "The Persecution of Jews in Libya Between 1938 and 1945". In Boum, Aomar; Abrevaya Stein, Sarah (eds.). The Holocaust and North Africa. De Gruyter. doi:10.1515/9781503607064-003
- ALT1: ... that prisoners at the Giado concentration camp (pictured) in Libya made a makeshift synagogue in one of their barracks?
꧁Zanahary꧂ 06:27, 20 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall:
The article is eligible for a copyright violation, therefore instantly making it ineligible for DYK, a large amount of direct paraphrasing is stated in the blockquotes, (I suggest changing the wording). TheNuggeteer (talk) 07:42, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
- In the blockquotes? Those are directly quoted (non-paraphrased) survivor testimony. Are they excessive? ꧁Zanahary꧂ 12:55, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry about my mistake, I accepted it, I could not read WP:BLOCKQUOTE.TheNuggeteer (talk) 23:59, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Dorothy Dworkin
- ... that immigrant midwife Dorothy Dworkin (pictured) is considered the matriarch of Toronto's Mount Sinai Hospital?
- Source: Lesley Barsky, From Generation to Generation: A History of Toronto's Mount Sinai Hospital pages 9–10: "The first nurse in charge of the dispensary was Dora "Dorothy" Goldstick, who was to become a driving force behind Mount Sinai Hospital. Born in Windau, Latvia, in 1890, Goldstick had gone ... to train in midwifery. After receiving her diploma from the Medical State Board of Ohio in 1909, she returned to Toronto" and page 131 "with the assembly of hospital matriarch Dorothy Dworkin and a group of escorts"
Reidgreg (talk) 13:24, 20 June 2024 (UTC).
- Comment I will review this nomination. – Editør (talk) 14:36, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
- Review – The article is new enough (promoted to GA on 20 June 2024), is long enough (8000+ characters of prose), has no copyright issues, and is presentable (both per Talk:Dorothy Dworkin/GA1). The hook is cited and interesting. Although the linked source is not available without an account, I was able to confirm the information by other sources [11] [12], so I don't see an issue here. The image is properly licensed, clear in a smaller size, and used in the article. I thought the most remarkable fact from the article are the thousands of people that she helped immigrate from Europe to Canada to escape the Holocaust, did you consider this for the hook?
– Editør (talk) 16:02, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
- I did, but I wasn't sure that 'helped' was strong enough for a good hook. (Her husband and brother-in-law also participated with the travel business, though she is usually singled out as the "rainmaker" who 'made things happen'). Anyways, I thought someone might have a problem with independent sources being a little weak on the specifics. Following is one I'd considered (using 'hundreds' for the 1930s, probably needs some rephrasing). – Reidgreg (talk) 23:19, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that during the 1930s, immigrant midwife Dorothy Dworkin (pictured) ran a labour hall, raised funds for a hospital expansion, published a newspaper, and helped hundreds of European Jews escape the Holocaust?
- I see, thanks. I think ALT1 lacks focus, so I prefer the original hook.
pass the original hook – Editør (talk) 00:00, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 21[edit]
185 Montague Street
- ... that just over a decade after 185 Montague Street was completed, one tenant proposed tearing down the building's upper stories? Source: "Brooklyn Offices in New Ownership; Webb & Knapp to Change 185 Montague St. Under Lease to Bank of Manhattan". The New York Times. October 14, 1944
- ALT1: ... that 185 Montague Street in New York City was once called "one of the jazziest little Art Deco skyscrapers in town"? Source: Morrone, Francis. An Architectural Guidebook to Brooklyn. Gibbs Smith. p. 146
- ALT2: ... that one critic likened the design of 185 Montague Street in New York City to the horns of Count Basie's orchestra? Source: Morrone, Francis. An Architectural Guidebook to Brooklyn. Gibbs Smith. p. 146
- ALT3: ... that 185 Montague Street in New York City was nearly fully occupied upon its completion, despite high vacancy rates in nearby buildings? Source: "New Bank to Serve Brooklyn Heights; Will Open This Week in Twelve-Story Title Guaranty Building". The New York Times. March 30, 1930.
- Reviewed: Michael Wettlaufer
- Comment: more hooks later
Epicgenius (talk) 15:49, 21 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Good work overall. Of these hooks, I prefer ALT3 (the contrast of being nearly full in a high-vacancy area stands out) and ALT1 (the connection may be clearer with an explicit mention of Art Deco style). Epicgenius, did you still want to propose additional hooks for consideration? Complex/Rational 15:36, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- @ComplexRational: Thanks for the review. On further thought, I don't think I have any other hooks in mind. Epicgenius (talk) 15:41, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
181 Montague Street
- ... that during the construction of 181 Montague Street in New York City, each of the building's columns was pulled by 14 horses? Source: "Big Columns of American Stone". Stone. Vol. 36, no. 2. February 1, 1915. p. 77.
- ALT1: ... that the columns of 181 Montague Street had to be installed using derricks even though the building was just two stories high? Source: "Peoples Trust Company in Handsome New Home". The Brooklyn Daily Eagle. March 25, 1906. p. 64.
- ALT2: ... that when 181 Montague Street was built, it was called one of Brooklyn's most elaborate structures? Source: "Peoples Trust Company in Handsome New Home". The Brooklyn Daily Eagle. March 25, 1906. p. 64.
- Reviewed: WOTF-TV
- Comment: more hooks later
Epicgenius (talk) 15:43, 21 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: TheNuggeteer (talk) 12:06, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Charlemagne
- ... that Charlemagne owned an elephant which he received as a gift from the Abbasid caliph Harun al-Rashid?
- Source: Paul E. Dutton, Charlemagne's Mustache: And Other Cultural Clusters of a Dark Age, pp. 59-61
- Reviewed:
Seltaeb Eht (talk) 23:43, 22 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: The hook and the article have no problems; this is my second review, so take my opinion with a grain of salt. TheNuggeteer (talk) 03:20, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Banner in the Sky
- ... that Banner in the Sky inspired a Canadian dentist to climb the Matterhorn?
- Source: "The book stuck with Smith, a local dentist, for so long that a few weeks ago, at age 62, he climbed the Matterhorn himself." [13]
- ALT1: ... that Banner in the Sky was inspired by the first ascent of the Matterhorn? Source: "In 1865, an Englishman by the name of Edward Whymper became the first man to climb the ... Matterhorn. ... Ullman took inspiration from this real-life account when ... [writing] Banner in the Sky." [14]
- ALT2: ... that before writing Banner in the Sky Ullman climbed the Matterhorn with his son? Source: "Ullman has come up with a superb mountain-climbing story for young readers. The author and his son recently climbed the Matterhorn" [15]
- Reviewed:
TipsyElephant (talk) 12:10, 22 June 2024 (UTC).
- I think I misunderstood what to enter for the author. Andrewa created the redirect and then I converted it into an article. TipsyElephant (talk) 12:25, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: The source stated at both the dyk and the article needs a specific login to a school/institution. This is my third review, so take my opinion with a grain of salt. TheNuggeteer (talk) 03:32, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 22[edit]
Aid climbing
- ... that in 1993, Lynn Hill became the first person to free climb The Nose (pictured), one of the most famous aid climbing routes on El Capitan?
- Source: Outside Magazine, PlanetMountain, Gripped Magazine
- Reviewed:
Aszx5000 (talk) 13:45, 23 June 2024 (UTC).
Approving nomination. Article is long enough and promoted to GA 1 day before DYK nom. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and copyvio-free (excluding quoted section). Hook is interesting and well-sourced. Image meets criteria. QPQ not needed. Good to go. Thank you for you nomination Aszx5000! Kimikel (talk) 02:35, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
Jacob Geller
- ... that Jewish video essayist Jacob Geller cited Jewish traditions of study and scholarship as an inspiration behind his analysis of popular culture?
- Source: Engber, Corinne. "Running on Serendipity: Jacob Geller on Video Game Journalism", Jewish Boston, 16 February 2021. Retrieved 2 June 2024.
- Reviewed:
Orchastrattor (talk) 20:53, 22 June 2024 (UTC).
Article is long enough and published a day before DYK submission. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and copyvio-free. Hook is interesting and sourced. QPQ not needed. Good to go. Thank you for your nomination Orchastrattor! Kimikel (talk) 02:26, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
Supernovae in fiction
- ... that in fiction, supernovae (pictured) are induced to serve as weapons, power sources for time travel, and advertisements?
- Source: weaponized, power source for time travel, advertisement.
TompaDompa (talk) 21:59, 22 June 2024 (UTC).
article was recently promoted, is long enough and is within policy. Hook is short enough and interesting. QPQ is complete. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:49, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Georg Kareski
- ... that Zionist activist Georg Kareski defended the Nuremberg Laws in a Nazi newspaper? Source: https://www.jta.org/archive/kareski-quoted-by-angriff-as-justifying-nuremberg-laws
(t · c) buidhe 05:54, 22 June 2024 (UTC).
Hi Buidhe (talk), review follows: article created 22 June; article is on the shorter side but exceeds minimum length; sources look to be reliable for the information cited; a QPQ has been carried out; hook fact is interesting and stated in the article. I don't have access to the academic sources cited but happy to assume they support the statement, the JTA contemporary source reports the fact. I didn't spot any overly close paraphrasing from the sources I could access. Looks fine to me, interesting article/subject - Dumelow (talk) 12:11, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 23[edit]
A9 dualling project
- ... that the upgrades of the A9 in Scotland between Perth and Inverness is far from being complete despite the 2025 deadline?
- ALT1: ... that Transport Scotland promised to dual the A9 from Perth to Inverness by 2025, but only 11 miles have been done by 2023, leaving 77 miles to be dualled? Source: https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-scotland-64568406
- Reviewed:
JuniperChill (talk) 10:10, 24 June 2024 (UTC).
- Comment I meant to say 'Moved to mainspace', not created as this was a draft before I moved it onto mainspace yesterday JuniperChill (talk) 10:15, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
New enough, well written, quite interesting. no copy vio Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 01:49, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Ascension Island Marine Protected Area
- ... that Ascension Island has declared its entire ocean territory a protected area with no commercial fishing permitted? Source: Pew Trusts
- ALT1: ... that research undertaken to create the Ascension Island Marine Protected Area found it would be more economical to ban commercial fishing altogether than to sell fishing licences? Source: Muench et al. 2022: "It was concluded that the current number of licenses sold would not cover the monitoring and enforcement cost for option 1: partial closure of the EEZ"
- ALT2: ... that the South Atlantic Anomaly prevents some remote sensing methods from working over the Ascension Island Marine Protected Area? Source: Rowlands et a. 2019: "VIIRS night time vessel detection products are locally ineffective because of the South Atlantic magnetic anomaly"
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Texas Centennial half dollar
- Comment: Other hook ideas welcome!
CMD (talk) 14:47, 23 June 2024 (UTC).
- I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:11, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:49, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
Cobra Crack
- ... that when Didier Berthod failed to make the first free ascent of Cobra Crack (pictured) in 2005, he quit climbing and became a Franciscan monk, but returned in 2024 to make the 20th ascent?
- Source: Climbing Mazine, PlanetMountain
Aszx5000 (talk) 13:57, 23 June 2024 (UTC).
Article has achieved Good Article status. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. Hook is interesting and sourced. QPQ is done. Looks ready to go. Thriley (talk) 03:01, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 24[edit]
East House mass shooting
- ... that a mass shooting in Sheffield, England in 1960 ended when the gunman was tackled by two policemen armed only with truncheons?
- Source: "Two brave police officers who disarmed a man with a gun who opened fire, killing three people in a Sheffield pub, have been honored for their actions ... Despite only having truncheons and knowing that Mohamed Ismail had a gun, the men called for him to come out. When he refused, they kicked the door through, disarmed Ismail and 'potentially prevented further death'" from:Horrobin, Natalie (26 June 2023). "True crime: Cops honoured for disarming man with gun who killed three in Sheffield pub". The Star (Sheffield). Retrieved 24 June 2024.
- ALT1: ... that a gunman that shot three people dead in Sheffield, England, in 1960 was deported to Somalia where he was killed in a shoot-out whilst "running amok"? Source: "Ismail was later deported to Somalia, but was killed in the 1960s during a shoot-out in a village during which he ‘ran amok’." from: Newton, Grace (2 January 2023). "Incredible story of unarmed policemen who tackled gunman after he shot three people dead in Yorkshire pub during New Year's Day singalong in 1960". Yorkshire Post. Retrieved 24 June 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Georg Kareski
Dumelow (talk) 12:08, 24 June 2024 (UTC).
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- The article refers to the shooting as a murder, but it doesn't seem to have been a conviction because of insanity. At least in article title discussions, the consensus has been to use the word murder to describe the incident only if there is a murder conviction. "Killing" or "shooting" would be accepted alternatives.
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
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Overall: (t · c) buidhe 00:46, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Hi buidhe, thanks for the review. I was going by the sources which use "murder", but see your point. I have switched out the wording in the article - Dumelow (talk) 04:59, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
- GTG
(t · c) buidhe 05:21, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 25[edit]
KEYE-TV
- ... that a Texas TV station hoped that being named for an eye would ease viewer confusion? Source: https://www.newspapers.com/clip/77199766/
Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 02:36, 28 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Good to go. Ergo Sum 15:13, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
Eurovision Song Contest 1989
- ... that the inclusion of two preteen competing performers at the Eurovision Song Contest 1989 led to the introduction of an age rule for participants at future contests?
- ALT1: ... that Yugoslavia's win at the Eurovision Song Contest 1989 was the country's first in twenty-four attempts, and would prove to be its only victory as the country began to break up two years later? Source: [16]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Diesel (donkey)
Sims2aholic8 (talk) 13:02, 26 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Recent GA, well written and well referenced, appears to be a complete coverage of the topic, and I couldn't find any obvious issues (it even gets the Greek names of two songs right!). Hooks are in the article, sourced and interesting. Personal preference is clearly for ALT1. QPQ done. Good to go! Constantine ✍ 16:35, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Coon Rapids Dam
- ... that the Coon Rapids Dam on the Mississippi River is the northern terminus of the river's navigable portion?
- Source: Anfinson, John (2003). River of History: A Historic Resources Study of the Mississippi National River and Recreation Area (PDF). Retrieved 25 June 2024.
- Reviewed: Snow Bowl (1985)
- Comment:
QPQ to come.
Pbritti (talk) 04:22, 26 June 2024 (UTC).
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- The sentences "One of the original steel gates is available for viewing on the Anoka County side of the dam." and "The dam connects to Elm Creek Park Reserve via the Rush Creek Regional Trail." are unsourced.
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- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
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Overall: @Darth Stabro and Pbritti: Nice work on this article. There are just a few issues that need to be fixed. Epicgenius (talk) 15:04, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius: Thanks for the review! I think the issues have been addressed. ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:06, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Looks good to go now. Epicgenius (talk) 16:13, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Catherine G. Williams
... that award-winning Iowa government social worker Catherine G. Williams started out as a tap dancer?
- Source: Reagen, Michael V. (May 25, 2020). "Iowa lost an icon with the death of Catherine Willliams, 105". Iowa Capital Dispatch. Retrieved June 25, 2024.
SL93 (talk) 02:30, 25 June 2024 (UTC).
Hi SL93, review follows: article created 25 June and exceeds minimum length; article is well written (I made some minor changes, feel free to revert if you want); article is cited inline throughout to reliable sources for the content cited (I don't think the claims cited to the funeral home exceed that allowed by WP:ABOUTSELF); I didn't pick up anything too worrying on a check for close paraphrasing (NB: Earwig is thrown off by the long quote and proper names); hook is interesting enough for me, mentioned in the article and checks out to source cited; a QPQ has been done. I have one query regarding the hook "award-winning" is listed at Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch, I wonder if "... that Iowa Social Worker of the Year" Catherine...) might be a good way to combine award-winning, location and occupation? Let me know - Dumelow (talk) 09:48, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- Dumelow I would be fine with just removing award-winning. While the award is significant, it's nowhere near as significant as an award with an article like the Iowa Women's Hall of Fame. ALTa ... that Iowa government social worker Catherine G. Williams started out as a tap dancer? SL93 (talk) 21:29, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
No problem, ALTa good to go - Dumelow (talk) 07:36, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
Ashin Munindabhivamsa
- ... that Myanmar’s junta Min Aung Hlaing publicly apologized religious leaders for the firearm death of Shindan Sayadaw, a prominent scholar monk who was shot by the Tatmadaw soldiers in June 2024? Source: VOA Burmese, The Irrawaddy
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Hypochrysops piceatus
- Comment: The subject was also nominated for ITN as RD.
Htanaungg (talk) 10:08, 25 June 2024 (UTC).
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The article appeared in the news before, and the hook does not seem interesting because these types of killings are common. Considering the reply of the nominator. I feel life ALT2 is more interesting. TheNuggeteer (talk) 00:52, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- @TheNuggeteer: Thank you for the review. Per WP:DYKNEW, I’ve mentioned in the comment that the subject is listed only in RD section of the ITN, not bold link.
- Although this type of killing may be common elsewhere, it is a rare case in the highly religious country that a prominent religious figure was shot dead by the ruling junta’s soldiers. Plus, it is very few that the junta apologized publicly; he would never show his weakness in public.
- I’d like to nominate another ALTs:
- ALT1: ...that Myanmar’s junta Min Aung Hlaing publicly apologized for the firearm death of Shindan Sayadaw, a few days after his spokesman blamed the opposition armed groups for the case?
- ALT2: ...that the assassination of Shindan Sayadaw in June 2024 led to a confrontation between the Burmese military and the religious leaders?
- Regards, Htanaungg (talk) 03:36, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
Software maintenance
- ... that maintenance of existing software is estimated to cost more than three times as much as its development? Source: various, see article
(t · c) buidhe 00:41, 25 June 2024 (UTC).
The article is new enough (promoted to GA yesteday).
The article is long enough.
The article is well-sourced, neutral, BLP-compliant, and copyvio-free. Earwig at 4.8%, copyvio unlikely.
The article is presentable.
The hook is cited to a reliable source (I assume Ref9 in the article), the source is not linked in the DYK.
Images are in public domain.
QPQ done.
Looks good to me. Vacant0 (talk) 11:58, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 26[edit]
WIAT
- ... that an Alabama TV station fired nearly its entire news staff and replaced its newscasts with a countdown clock for more than a month? Source: https://ajrarchive.org/Article.asp?id=2317
- ALT1: ... that the manager of an Alabama TV station expected a countdown clock to get more viewers than his newscasts did? Source: Hubbard, Russell (December 31, 1997). "Time for change: Countdown clock subs for 42 news". The Birmingham News. pp. 1A, 7A.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Yang Jingru (speed skater)
Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 20:21, 26 June 2024 (UTC).
Verified that the article is long enough, that there are no plagiarism concerns through the Copyvios tool and spotchecking, and that the hook is sourced in the article. Cunard (talk) 11:37, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- Both hooks are verified. Cunard (talk) 11:37, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Windy Zhan
... that Windy Zhan (pictured) is a member of the Hong Kong Cantopop girl group After Class who has been learning and practising vocal music since the age of five?
- Source: "詹天文成功考入美國伯克利音樂學院 繼姚焯菲後到海外升學". am730 (in Chinese (Hong Kong)). 4 April 2024. Retrieved 26 June 2024.: "After Class...成員...詹天文(Windy)...,她在5歲時已隨女高音歌唱家王珊及戚芷君學習正統聲樂"
- "與顧嘉煇王力宏做校友 詹天文獲伯克利音樂學院取錄". Mingpao Weekly (in Chinese (Hong Kong)). 5 April 2024. Archived from the original on 21 April 2024. Retrieved 26 June 2024.: "5歲開始隨女高音歌唱家王珊及戚芷君學習聲樂"
- "聲夢小花|詹天文獲伯克利音樂學院取錄 Windy音樂造詣高5歲學聲樂【多圖】". Hong Kong Economic Times (in Chinese (Hong Kong)). 5 April 2024. Archived from the original on 18 April 2024. Retrieved 26 June 2024.: "Windy在5歲起跟隨專業女高音歌唱家王珊、戚芷君學習正統聲樂"
- "《聲夢》詹天文獲伯克利音樂學院取錄成顧嘉煇王力宏師妹 5歲跟名師學聲樂屢獲獎". Headline Daily (in Chinese (Hong Kong)). 5 April 2024. Retrieved 26 June 2024.: "TVB歌唱節目《聲夢傳奇》首季參賽者詹天文(Windy)雖然沒有得到三甲名次,但憑出色歌藝被選中加入女子組合After Class...,5歲已跟專業女高音歌唱家王珊及戚芷君學習正統聲樂"
- Reviewed:
Will629 (talk) 19:13, 26 June 2024 (UTC).
Hello, Will629. The nomination is timely and the article is long enough with no copyvios detected. Several entries in the Discography table, as well as the Awards and nominations table, appear unsourced, though. These would require references. I think it can use some tweaking for catchiness; how about this?--NØ 19:35, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Windy Zhan (pictured) of the Hong Kong girl group After Class has been learning and practising vocal music since the age of five?
- MaranoFan, thank you very much for your prompt review. I have corrected the issues and your question suggestion is very good, thank you! May I ask what do I need to do for using your ALT1 suggestion, as I am new for DYK in English Wikipedia. Thank you!--Will629 (talk) 19:52, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
I have struck the first hook so ALT1 will be considered by the promotor, no further action required. Thank you for correcting the issues so quickly. Foreign-language reference accepted in good faith, this is good to go. Welcome to the English Wikipedia and best of luck here!--NØ 20:02, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you very much again!--Will629 (talk) 20:59, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- MaranoFan, thank you very much for your prompt review. I have corrected the issues and your question suggestion is very good, thank you! May I ask what do I need to do for using your ALT1 suggestion, as I am new for DYK in English Wikipedia. Thank you!--Will629 (talk) 19:52, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Windy Zhan (pictured) of the Hong Kong girl group After Class has been learning and practising vocal music since the age of five?
Ianto's Shrine
- ... that a shrine (pictured) dedicated to the fictional character Ianto Jones is visited by people from around the world?
- ALT1: ... that fans created Ianto's Shrine (pictured) after the death of a fictional character? Source: "In 2009, during the third series titled “Children of Earth”, Ianto met his untimely death which left fans shocked and heartbroken. What started as few flowers laid down at Mermaid Quay (the location used as Torchwood’s base) soon turned into hundreds more from grieving fans worldwide who decided to pay their respects to this much-loved character."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Croton alabamensis
- Comment: Could also be a non-picture hook if needed.
Suntooooth, it/he (talk/contribs) 02:06, 26 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Good job! TheNuggeteer (talk) 06:06, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 27[edit]
Buq Buq labor camp
- ... that after being freed from Buq Buq labor camp in Italian-occupied Egypt, Libyan Jewish prisoners had to walk home across the desert?
- Source: Roumani, Maurice M. “The Changing Fortunes of Libyan Jews under Italian Colonialism.” Jews of Libya: Coexistence, Persecution, Resettlement, Liverpool University Press, 2021, pp. 33–34. JSTOR, https://doi.org/10.2307/j.ctv3029jsr.9. Accessed 27 June 2024.
꧁Zanahary꧂ 12:53, 27 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: TheNuggeteer (talk) 01:32, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
- Zanahary, you wrote "which made the ordeal easier for the Jews"--can you explain whose opinion that was or how something was easier? Without such context it's kind of an odd statement. Thanks, Drmies (talk) 12:03, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
- Drmies Sure, done. ꧁Zanahary꧂ 13:29, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
Monumite
- ... that in 2010 Unilever invited Britons to congregate and worship at a shrine to Marmite (pictured)?
- Source: "Unilever, Marmite’s parent company, says the sculpture in Burton upon Trent will provide a place for fans to “congregate and worship” the salty spread" from: Baker, Rosie (19 October 2010). "Marmite unveils brand shrine". Marketing Week. Retrieved 27 June 2024.<
- ALT1: ... that a Portland Stone sculpture of a jar of Marmite (pictured) stands in Burton upon Trent, England? Source: "Marmite lovers says they are delighted with the new sculpture celebrating the yeast spread which has been sited in the centre of Burton-upon-Trent. ... Carved from Portland Stone, the sculpture also incorporates some digital elements. ... 'We intended to keep the design of the piece very simple. The form of the Marmite jar is so instantly recognisable; we wanted to celebrate this iconicity by producing a schematic representation of it'" from: "Marmite sculpture unveiled". BBC News. 18 October 2010. Retrieved 27 June 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Catherine G. Williams
Dumelow (talk) 16:34, 27 June 2024 (UTC).
- Reviewing... new enough, long enough, reads well, QPQ provided, very interesting hook. Will complete soon. Whispyhistory (talk) 10:20, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
... Both hooks are followed by citations to references containing hook fact, neutral, no copyvio issues, image is clear and free. Whispyhistory (talk) 14:03, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Pure Japanese
- ... that Pure Japanese is titled so in its native Japan?
- Source: The movie's trailer and poster
- ALT0a: ... that Pure Japanese is released under this English title in its native Japan?
- ALT1: ... that Pure Japanese uses the idea that "if the operating system called the language controls the thoughts and actions of the human race to deliver language OS DNAs to the future"? Source: If Japanese language is the human OS tool and if that OS is simply driving the human race to deliver "Language OS DNAs" to the future, the question is "where is this demigod-like language OS taking Japanese tribe to?" That was the idea.
- ALT2: ... that Pure Japanese is a film that offers both Ninja shows and action scenes? Source: I learned the Ninja moves in Nikko. I practiced with the actual Ninja players at Nikko Edo Wonderland a few times but prior to that, I spent more time in the studio with the action team to get the basic movements down.
- ALT3: ... that in Pure Japanese, there is a tool called the "PJ kit" to measure the purity of Japanese people? Source: 本作に登場する検査キット(PJキット)はパロディというか、ギャグですよね。/The test kit (PJ kit) in this work is a parody or a gag.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/List of roles and awards of Liza Soberano
- Comment: Yes, the hook is stating the obvious, but just notice the irony in the title. I've provided a modified version of hook in case it's a little unclear; I just think ALT0 is more concise. Please hold for July 17, on the movie's second anniversary outside Japan
Nineteen Ninety-Four guy (talk) 08:21, 27 June 2024 (UTC).
Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 01:46, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: GA DYK on approval day, satisfactory GAR, enough said. I prefer ALT0. BTW ALT2 and ALT3 aren't written in compliance with WP:DYKFICTION; ALT2 should clarify it is part of the production process, not the plot, and ALT3 is part of the plot. ミラP@Miraclepine 02:09, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 28[edit]
BB's Tex-Orleans
- ... that Cajun-Texan restaurant chain BB's Tex-Orleans recycled over 14 tons of shucked oyster shells to help restore oyster habitats in Galveston Bay?
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Kimikel (talk) 01:56, 28 June 2024 (UTC).
Fifth nomination of the user. All parts of the article are cited with no problems with copyright. The stated hook is also mentioned in the article. Overall no problems and good to go. Toadboy123 (talk) 15:10, 1 July 2024 (UTC).
Sport in Vatican City
- ... that sport in Vatican City started in the 1st century, when a chariot racing track was built in what was then ancient Rome?
- ALT1: ... that in the aftermath of World War II, sport in Vatican City was encouraged by Pope Pius XII? Source: [19]
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Arconning (talk) 09:24, 28 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Source 1 doesn't seem to mention the facts in the hook, and the second source seems somewhat partisan and I'm somewhat suspicious of the quality of an article starting with "Did You Know". Does the academic source mentioned in the same paragraph in this article ([20]) mention it in any way? That would be much better. Flemmish Nietzsche (talk) 06:42, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Flemmish Nietzsche: Sadly, the academic source doesn't back the claim up but it does back up the claim that an area in the Vatican was once a chariot racing track. Though I'm not sure what's Wikipedia's and the DYK's policy on "possibly statements" (i.e. ...that sport in Vatican City possibly started in the 1st century, when a chariot racing track was built in what was then ancient Rome?" I suggest using ALT1 instead if that's the case. Though I can make another hook if it isn't interesting enough. Arconning (talk) 06:27, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Arconning I checked that journal I suggested, fand you're right about it not being definite that the chariot track ever actually existed there. ALT1 is not the most interesting, but I could accept it if there's nothing else better you can find. How about "... that sport in Vatican City began in the 16th century with the first ever match of calcio fiorentino, an early form of football?" This might not be the "start" of sport in the area that is now the Vatican, but it seems to be the first major event when that area was under the control of an independent Papal State, so I think it would pass. Flemmish Nietzsche (talk) 07:28, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Flemmish Nietzsche For the hook that you suggested, I'm all for it but with some minor tweaks. Since we can't really determine when sport in Vatican City really started, I think we should put something like "governed by the nation", "started by the nation", or something shorter. (i.e. ... that sport in Vatican City started by the nation began in the 16th century with the first ever match of calcio fiorentino, an early form of football?"). Arconning (talk) 07:38, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Arconning "started by the nation" seems somewhat iffy, as it could be confused with "nation" meaning a group of people sharing a common identity rather than a sovereign state; maybe "state-sponsored" or "officially" would be better? (... that state-sponsored sport in Vatican City began in the 16th century with the first ever match of calcio fiorentino, an early form of football?") Flemmish Nietzsche (talk) 07:45, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Flemmish Nietzsche "Officially" works fine with me. Arconning (talk) 07:49, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
ALT2: ... that sport in Vatican City officially began in the 16th century with the first ever match of calcio fiorentino, an early form of football?" Flemmish Nietzsche (talk) 07:59, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Flemmish Nietzsche "Officially" works fine with me. Arconning (talk) 07:49, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Arconning "started by the nation" seems somewhat iffy, as it could be confused with "nation" meaning a group of people sharing a common identity rather than a sovereign state; maybe "state-sponsored" or "officially" would be better? (... that state-sponsored sport in Vatican City began in the 16th century with the first ever match of calcio fiorentino, an early form of football?") Flemmish Nietzsche (talk) 07:45, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Flemmish Nietzsche For the hook that you suggested, I'm all for it but with some minor tweaks. Since we can't really determine when sport in Vatican City really started, I think we should put something like "governed by the nation", "started by the nation", or something shorter. (i.e. ... that sport in Vatican City started by the nation began in the 16th century with the first ever match of calcio fiorentino, an early form of football?"). Arconning (talk) 07:38, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Arconning I checked that journal I suggested, fand you're right about it not being definite that the chariot track ever actually existed there. ALT1 is not the most interesting, but I could accept it if there's nothing else better you can find. How about "... that sport in Vatican City began in the 16th century with the first ever match of calcio fiorentino, an early form of football?" This might not be the "start" of sport in the area that is now the Vatican, but it seems to be the first major event when that area was under the control of an independent Papal State, so I think it would pass. Flemmish Nietzsche (talk) 07:28, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
ABC Cinema, Brighton
- ... that the world premiere of Brighton Rock was held at Brighton's ABC Cinema (pictured)?
- Source: Allen Eyles (2003), Brighton and Hove Cinemas, p.71. "At midnight on Thursday 8 January 1948, the world premiere of Brighton Rock took place at the Savoy (no other cinema was in the running, as it was made by ABC's associated production company)." (First sentence from a full paragraph about the premiere. The Savoy was the name of the cinema at the time, as noted in the article.)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Chicken of Tomorrow Contest
- Comment: Another Brighton article contributed as part of the recent restarting of Wikipedia:WikiProject Brighton.
Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 19:20, 28 June 2024 (UTC).
- Reveiewing... new enough, long enough, QPQ provided. Hook in article, image free. Will complete soon. Whispyhistory (talk) 06:31, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
...No copyvio issues, neutral. Hook is followed by a citation to a reference i cannot see, though a copy of the text is provided above. Reads well and hook and article are interesting. Thank you for your work. Whispyhistory (talk) 10:16, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 29[edit]
National Coordination Committee Against Corruption and Crime
- ... that Bangladeshi government agency National Coordination Committee Against Corruption and Crime collected ৳6.5 billion (equivalent to ৳16 billion or US$140 million in 2022) from corruption suspects which the court deemed was illegal?
Mehedi Abedin 03:00, 30 June 2024 (UTC).
Interesting article. All parts of the article are cited with no problems with copyright. The stated hook is also mentioned in the article with proper sourcing. Good to go. Toadboy123 (talk) 14:34, 1 July 2024 (UTC).