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Why is electronic not listed next to pop in genres under the infobox?
Add a comma after third studio album
The songwriting and production sentence should be the second of the first para instead
"five months after the album's original release." → "five months after the original release."
"issued "Vibe" as" → "issued it as"
"Musically, "Vibe" is an" → "It is an"
"contrary to other Sway tracks" → "contrary to the album's other tracks"
""Vibe" was met with generally positive reviews" → ""Vibe" received generally positive reviews" and add what they praised about it
Done the first part, but I don't really know how to summarize the reviews. Do you see a common thread in the reviews? Pancake (talk) 19:21, 12 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
"the single appeared below" → "the song appeared below"
"peaking at number ten" → "peaking at number 10" per MOS:NUM
Remove pipe on Heatseeker
"of the United Kingdom and Nordic legs" → "of the British and Nordic legs" for consistency with the way you refer to these areas
I believe all of these have been addressed. Pancake (talk) 19:21, 12 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
"Soon after the release" → "Shortly after the release"
Done.
"she had been working" → "Styrke had been working"
Done.
The source does not say it was only added to digital editions
Well it says it was added. A song can't be added to physical editions without the album being re-released, which it never was. The only versions of the album were issued before this song. I don't know how to cite the fact that it isn't on physical editions. Pancake (talk) 19:21, 12 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Since the guitar-heavy sentence essentially uses part of the same quote, why don't you paraphrase the second part to something like she had wanted to create a guitar-based song for a while?
Remove the comma after percussion
"She elaborated, "It's" → "Styrke elaborated that "it's"
"a bit sadder."" → "a bit sadder"." per MOS:QUOTE (this is not a full sentence in the source)'
From what I can tell it's a well-known music magazine in Denmark. I have found their reviews cited in articles by DR and JydskeVestkysten, [1][2]. I'm not Danish myself but it seems reliable. Pancake (talk) 19:21, 12 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
On hold until all of the issues are fixed; nice work here! --K. Peake 09:14, 5 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the review! Appreciate it :) Pancake (talk) 19:22, 12 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
PancakeMistake Thanks for going over this, however change electronic and pop to two separate genres in the infobox, add at least a vague part like "some of whom" after music critics to summarize something that was praised by at least a few and add citations from various countries retailers for digital download and streaming. --K. Peake 09:31, 15 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake Tried to summarize the reviews, let me know what you think. Genre and various retailers, done. Pancake (talk) 17:58, 17 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
✓Pass now, I briefly copyedited but nice job! --K. Peake 20:17, 17 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]