Talk:Quincy McKnight

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Review: September 2, 2021. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:14, 31 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"won a diocesan championship" what's one of those?
- It's a championship for his Catholic diocese. How do you propose I phrase that? ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"become better at basketball going forward" going forward feels redundant. He couldn't do it any other direction.
- Removed "going forward." ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Connecticut and" comma after Connecticut.
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Is there a link for "points per game", like Points per game?
- Linked. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"to The Phelps School, where" no comma required.
- Removed. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"honor roll performer" what's one of those?
- Added "academically" to clarify. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"4.2 rebounds, and 3.5 assists per game" links for rebounds and assists?
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"2015 Jordan Brand Classic Regional Game" is this a big deal?
- Yes, it is, and worthy of mention. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
What's PAISSA?
- Changed to simply "state championship". ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"lightly recruited, being regarded as a two-star recruit" recruited/recruit repetitive and what does "lightly recruited" mean?
- It means not many schools offered him a scholarship. This is a common enough phrase and I don't think it needs to be changed. I did reword "recruit" to "prospect" however. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"play college basketball for" link that again here.
- I'm assuming you mean "college basketball." ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"triple-overtime" link?
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
" 1.6 steals" link?
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"free throws" link?
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"listed as day-to-day" what?
- It's what his condition was considered. What do you propose? ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"with the 7th pick" seventh.
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Would be nice if the table complied with MOS:DTT for row and col scopes but not a GA requirement.
- Honestly, I have no idea how to do this, but feel free to take a stab. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
What does "Redshirt" mean??
- Provided a link. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 10 - SHOUTING.
- Changed to lowercase. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:32, 31 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I have responded to all your points. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 01:29, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]