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GA Review[edit]

  • "It was written by co-executive producer Jeph Loeb and directed by executive producer Allan Arkush, and aired on 3 December 2007 as the conclusion of the "Volume 2: Generations" storyline" - try to avoid having more than one "and" in a sentence.
  • "The episodes main storylines revolve around" - apostrophe for episode, and more than one storyline??
  • "compound in Odessa in search of the virus." - context. What's the virus?
  • "was originally conceived to be the conclusion of "Generations"" - what's generations?
  • Ref 4 needs a publisher.
  • "gave the episode an "A" grading, though he felt the episode" - a bit of repetition that could be fixed up
  • "Stephen Lackey of Mania" - not sure this is the article you want

And please leave me a note when done. Cheers, giggy (:O) 00:09, 25 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

All raised points have been fixed. Corn.u.co.pia ♥ Disc.us.sion 08:16, 25 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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