Talk:Oshikhandass
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Small grammar edits[edit]
Made a few corrections to clean up grammar and syntax.--JackBNimble43 (talk) 22:49, 29 June 2019 (UTC)
Clarity[edit]
What does "The land was under custody of the valley" mean? What valley? If it's some governmental subdivision, whats it's name?--JackBNimble43 (talk) 22:51, 29 June 2019 (UTC)