Talk:Hepatic hydrothorax/GA2

GA Review[edit]

Passed. Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 15:53, 21 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Aeschylus (talk · contribs) 18:21, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 10:22, 10 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I should finish the review today. Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 10:22, 10 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It is much more common on the right side, with 85% of cases occurring on the right redundancy
Link severe ascites on fist occurrence
In cases that do not respond What does "cases" mean here?
The prognosis is usually poor. Needs further explanation
In some people, the main symptoms of people with cirrhosis are respiratory and related to the effusion. Unsourced
The condition generally has no specific symptoms comma after symptoms
The condition generally has no specific symptoms as it generally occurs Redundancy
I notice the articles is underlinked. Please fix that
less than 1 cm Add a cvt template
I don't see anything on its causes
For those with refractory hepatic hydrothorax Change those to patients
In people with serious liver dysfunction, TIPS may cause liver failure, as it shunts blood away from the liver. Unsourced
Please change for those to for patients throughout the article
Sources are reliable
File:Hepatic hydrothorax after treatment.png lacks an author

@Aeschylus: That's all from me. Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 11:31, 12 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sounds good! I will work on it promptly.
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Partly done: I changed to people, as we need to write for the layperson per MEDMOS
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Not done for now Doesn't this violate MEDMOS?
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Done aeschylus (talk) 20:33, 12 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Driveby comment. Article on medical conditions should strive to use the most up-to-date appropriate sources, per WP:MEDDATE. There's a recent open access review at PMID 38505059 that perhaps could be used in this article. Esculenta (talk) 14:19, 13 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Aeschylus: You might want to consider this. Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 19:43, 13 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I am, my activity is on-and-off. I will do so rn. aeschylus (talk) 21:53, 13 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Aeschylus: Let me know if you're done, because it seems like you aren't even addressing some of the issues I've raised. Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 07:23, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wolverine XI: AFAIK, I have addressed all of your concerns. However, I may have missed some. If I have, don't hesitate to let me know. aeschylus (talk) 19:32, 20 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done. aeschylus (talk) 19:33, 20 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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